Laika - Comments

I agree with all 3 commenters above
- The beginning sounds good, sounds intriguing.
- Great idea. Seriously.
- Potential. Not cliche.

So yes, I like this story :)

I think it has potential, dont make it cliche` and really take your time with it... :)
It'll work out in the end <3

I like the idea of this story, so I say keep.

I'd say keep, but that's just me.
There's not much of a start so it's hard to tell, but it's still intriguing, and sounds like it's going to be good.