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Natka
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I agree with all 3 commenters above
- The beginning sounds good, sounds intriguing.
- Great idea. Seriously.
- Potential. Not cliche.
So yes, I like this story :)
December 11th, 2010 at 11:20pm
Squirrely.Kassi
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I think it has potential, dont make it cliche` and really take your time with it... :)
It'll work out in the end <3
September 20th, 2010 at 09:40pm
livvy;
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I like the idea of this story, so I say keep.
September 20th, 2010 at 07:13pm
synthetic.
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I'd say keep, but that's just me.
There's not much of a start so it's hard to tell, but it's still intriguing, and sounds like it's going to be good.
September 20th, 2010 at 07:02pm
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- The beginning sounds good, sounds intriguing.
- Great idea. Seriously.
- Potential. Not cliche.
So yes, I like this story :)