First off, thank you, thank you for writing something different. :)
Second off, this is very well written and the length is nice for a short story. Long enough to count but short enough to hold my attention. Haha.
The only problem I had with this is the very last line. "And then, I was sick" I think it said. I don't really understand. Was it meant to mean he got physically sick, or was it supposed to be something like, "But then again, I am sick"?
Second off, this is very well written and the length is nice for a short story. Long enough to count but short enough to hold my attention. Haha.
The only problem I had with this is the very last line.
"And then, I was sick" I think it said.
I don't really understand. Was it meant to mean he got physically sick, or was it supposed to be something like, "But then again, I am sick"?
Overall, great job. :D