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  • Fading-Away

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    I loved the whole story... but the only problem I had with it is the fact that Juliann's age changed...
    First he was 15, the 16, back to 15, then 17 and finally back to 15... so... which is he????
    February 28th, 2011 at 07:40am
  • cattfeine

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    i don't think an elaborate ending was needed, it was better this way.
    December 11th, 2010 at 04:22am
  • animeQT613

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    OMG!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! XD
    December 3rd, 2010 at 05:44am
  • MudbloodAngel

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    :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
    myy godd.
    updateeee sooonsies !
    December 2nd, 2010 at 10:13am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    Noooooooooo.......... D:
    December 1st, 2010 at 09:45pm
  • yellowjellybean14

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    YAYi am subscribed to the sequel. i am upset that she told brian that she was not pregnant i did not expect her to lie, thought she would be smarter and admit she was pregnant. i am not trying to be mean and please do not take offense but that was not very original and I was hoping that she do something different and admit that she was pregnant. please update this story so we can start the sequel because i am ready for zacky to meet her and tell brian so he will come see her bronx and their child.
    December 1st, 2010 at 06:29pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    Okay..
    I'm royally pissed at Nissa.
    She's so dumb.
    I mean, I know she's thinking she's doing the right thing for everyone...but this can only end badly.
    December 1st, 2010 at 12:34pm
  • misery_writer925

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    Awww why did she lie hurry more more
    Oooooeoee
    December 1st, 2010 at 04:54am
  • nickiandlogan

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    UPDATE SOON PLEASE :)
    December 1st, 2010 at 03:55am
  • ForeverHopeful

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    I LOVE this story! so so so so so so so so so good! :)
    Now Brian needs to get his butt in gear and get away from Michelle and be with the mother to his child :D I seriously love this story so much! keep writing :)
    December 1st, 2010 at 02:05am
  • LindaValo

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    O_O OH MY GOD!!! she's having brians baby >_< he needs to show already, or something! EEEEK! I can't WAIT to read more of this to see what happens lol
    December 1st, 2010 at 01:36am
  • Hannahdoll

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    Shit.
    They need to talk, seriously....
    December 1st, 2010 at 01:07am
  • misery_writer925

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    Omg Brian needs to choose his future kid or wife more soon please
    December 1st, 2010 at 12:09am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    OMG! MORE SOON!?
    D8
    I'm sitting on the edge of my seat here!!
    December 1st, 2010 at 12:03am
  • misery_writer925

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    Oh no!!!! Hurry more more more MORE!!!!!!!
    November 30th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • LindaValo

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    kjasldkfjlaskdfj OMG! o_O I'm sorry I don't get to comment right away, since I bearly have internet anymore...but when I do, I READ! lol...but WOW...that just....I have no words for what I just read lol...can't wait to see what happnes now! UPDATE AGAIN! lol...and he just...left her... :/
    November 30th, 2010 at 01:31am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    OH shit. D8
    Thats not cool for Brian to just leave like that.. D:
    November 29th, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • yellowjellybean14

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    WHY WHY WHY would brian leave when she says she might be pregnant. he better turn around before he walks out that door and walk right back to her and be an adult and deal with what comes next.
    November 29th, 2010 at 08:47pm
  • JamiSpeed

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    this story is so amazing. i hope you keep writing. i would love to see where is goes :)
    November 29th, 2010 at 07:12pm
  • loveablycryptic_2

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    Awesome, can't wait for the next part.. love this story
    November 29th, 2010 at 06:14am