I read this quite a while ago and just re-read it and remembered why I liked it. It was so lovely and it flowed so perfectly, it's so insperational, and beautiful and simple. You have serious talent and in this story it shines through. I don't think I could say anything bad about this at all, it's one of the stories that's always stayed in the back of my head and made me think, "I want to write something like this." But I don't think I could ever do that, this is too perfect. You should be seriously proud of this piece, I think it's one of the best on Mibba, no joke.
October 11th, 2011 at 10:55pm