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  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    that was an awwweessooommeeeee ending :D nowww write a chapter for the sequel :D please?
    December 31st, 2010 at 07:05pm
  • Bucky.Barnes

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    Oh, it's not over yet. (=
    Believe me we don't want to end it either, but it has to come to an end at some point. lol
    December 10th, 2010 at 03:44am
  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    I looovvvveeeddd this chapter I mean damn alex get of through your head she doesn't want to be friends lawlz annnddd It was just amazing :D
    December 10th, 2010 at 01:31am
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    You need to update again! Pleeeeeease!
    Cause you can't end it like that.
    December 10th, 2010 at 12:58am
  • XoNeSeCrEtX

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    I just got all into the story and stuff and then there's no moar chapter D: update sssoooonnnn
    December 7th, 2010 at 04:43am
  • alustreya

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    I don't know why I wanted to cry at the snow globes part. Was that meant to happen?
    But Jack, that was sort of a creeper status there, internet searching her name.
    Good chapter though :D
    November 4th, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • alustreya

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    What is going on here?! Oh my God.
    Meganmeganmegan!
    October 21st, 2010 at 04:08am
  • Me and Chronicles

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    Great story! Personally, I don't do this type of drama, but it grabbed my attention!
    Arianna all the way!
    October 21st, 2010 at 12:20am
  • emilyrose

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    Oh.my.god!
    Draaaamaaaa!
    I love it!
    God. This story is just amazing.
    Always Looking forward to updates :)
    October 20th, 2010 at 09:21am
  • Neopolitan Dreams

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    Okay, so I have to say I'm Team Meghan but at the same time, I don't want to commit to it because I know I'm going to be so disappointed if Arianna ends up with Alex. That said, I do like Arianna and I love how her inner conflict with her feeling towards Alex are written but I'm not completely sympathetic towards her. To be honest, the way it's played out so far, I can't see me being satisfied if Arianna does win Alex just because I love the tension too much and the dynamic they have - without throwing in a relationship. I hope some of this made sense :|
    October 18th, 2010 at 12:23pm
  • emilyrose

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    I'm still all for team Meghan and Alex!
    October 17th, 2010 at 11:35am
  • alustreya

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    Well that was a slap in the face... hehhhh play on words. Just kidding.
    But really.

    I'm just wondering how long they can go before the secret's out.
    October 7th, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • emilyrose

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    I love it!
    It's really good and I have never read a twin story like this one and this is the best!
    Keep it up.
    October 5th, 2010 at 04:33am
  • alustreya

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    Asdhdkgljd what is up with Ariana?
    I gotta say, Meghan sounds better and I'm glad Alex is paying attention to her.
    But who knows, you two may have tricks up your sleeves and turn this around.
    Either way, I still love the fact that these are twins and it looks like Alex is getting in between them without knowing what he's getting into, as in, not knowing they're twins and that one is in love with him.
    October 4th, 2010 at 09:26am
  • Siriano;

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    I love the layout, although I don't really see how it fits the story. It doesn't really fit either of your main characters. Pretty though.

    The idea of twins being really different has been done and done, but this isn't terrible or overly cliched. I like Meghan. Ariana's annoying.

    I wouldn't link to pictures of your characters in the summary. Just describe them and let your reader picture them how they want to. The links in the authors notes also seem to be a way of getting around the rule of not being able to have pictures in the story. Oh well, they're not that distracting.

    Overall, this is not bad. :) I kinda like it. It's not something I would search for, but if I stumbled upon it, I wouldn't be mad. It's a bit of a guilty pleasure.

    Anyways, keep it up.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 09:04pm
  • Storm Sparks.

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    Can i just say that i absolutely LOVE the layout!!! it's so cute and dainty and pretty! This is a really good story so far. I like how this is different (well I think it's different) from all the other twin stories.Plus this has Alex Gaskarth in it too?!!! <3
    October 3rd, 2010 at 08:30pm
  • wicked ways

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    Awesome I love it!
    October 3rd, 2010 at 01:25pm
  • alustreya

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    Hey! Wow, wonderful story so far.
    I'm liking the idea :D Can't wait for more!
    This seems like it'll be really interesting.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 09:19am