ohmy, this is so cute and sweet and i absolutely loved it! =)
December 10th, 2010 at 03:36am
I'm so sorry it's taken me forever to comment on this. :]
I guess I'll start with the layout first, which is seriously amazing. That banner blows my mind. And the imagery throughout the entire oneshot amazes me.
I feel like I'm on that hill, Pretty soon all of the lush, green leaves would turn to warmer shades of red, brown, and orange. Then they would fall to the ground, almost as if they were surrendering to the harsh climate of the winter ahead. I could see that so easily in my mind.
I also love that the relationship Audrey has with John is so realistic. We made a pact to make this relationship work. Long distance? We can do it. Love knows no distance. That really stuck with me even after reading this, since I'm in a long distance relationship as well.
I really can't help but get super smiley reading this, the love Audrey and John have is like radiating. They're adorable. And oh my gosh. I totally thought he was going to propose, and even though he didn't it was still so adorable.
The first snowfall, it's always the best to watch, especially with someone you love. :] And the last line, that was definitely my favorite.
Overall I'd say that was pretty fantastic. I got the Autumn/Winter vibe I asked for and it's honestly making me wish Autumn was moving along a little faster here were I am. I didn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes :] I really enjoyed reading this.
I think I'm actually going to go read it again. Thank you for entering this :]