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  • AJ9

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    I've just read this from start to finish. It took me about three days. I loved it so much. You said you were doing a sequel to this but I can't find one. Did you change your mind? I hope you are going to do one though, because I would definitely enjoy reading more of Zacky and Trinity's adventures. Please post the sequel to this soon xxx
    August 4th, 2016 at 01:09pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    i love this story def cant wait for the sequel :D
    December 31st, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • zackyvravageme

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    Haha! The ending was amazing! Can't wait for the sequel! <3 this story :D
    November 12th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    haha. I loved the story and can't wait for the sequel
    November 5th, 2011 at 08:18am
  • MamaZ

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    Another kid?! They're going to have another kid?! Damn someone needs to get her tubes tied or something. I'm sad to see that this story is over, but I'm glad to hear that there will be another one.
    November 4th, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • Charmed20

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    Heey that was an awesome last chapter and funny to ;D
    Can't wait for the sequel.

    Xoxox
    November 4th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    Hahaha, seriously?

    Fertile Myrtle and Super Sperm, I guess.
    November 4th, 2011 at 01:07pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    aww. Loved the chapter =)
    September 9th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • palazzbm

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    Awwwwww those are some cute names
    September 8th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • MamaZ

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    The names are cute, Jimmy was cute/funny, Zack and Matt both had me laughing my ass off and Val was pretty funny as well. Over all this chapter was fantastic and I loved it.
    September 8th, 2011 at 01:33pm
  • mistery gurl

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    im glad jimmy didnt forget about james :)
    September 8th, 2011 at 12:28pm
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    omg that chapter made me smile it was soooo cute :D
    September 8th, 2011 at 12:23pm
  • Total Nightmare

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    Pwease update! :)
    I love it!
    August 16th, 2011 at 03:22am
  • levilover

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    I just wanted to say, this is one of the best stories that I have ever read on here. It makes me smile so much and I absolutely love it. You have impeccable writing skills and I must say that I wish I had the talent the you so clearly have!
    July 28th, 2011 at 09:32am
  • Mystic Monster

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    I love it. :)
    July 22nd, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • Libbyluhu22

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    Story is awesome!!!! I'm addicted!! Plz keep writing!!!
    July 20th, 2011 at 01:29am
  • MamaZ

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    at least her and zack now have some kind of understanding with her mood swings
    July 17th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    yeah men dont no what its like to be pregnant we carry the baby for 9 month all they have to do is nothing
    July 17th, 2011 at 02:18pm
  • sweet17tea

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    Love this! Can't wait for the end. :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 10:52am
  • mistery gurl

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    that guy will be back,
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:54am