Wretched - Comments

I loved this. It was so sweet! The ending had me smiling!!! So cute.

Love! <3

I love it... Amazingly written...
My Favorite part: His heart sped up as he watched Wretched laugh in delight, and an incredible warmth spread from his chest outward. His breath came in odd pants, and his eyes felt teary.

I agree with so sedated. this need more comments:)

Why is there no comments on this?! D:<

That's absurd. People these days.

Anyways, it was cute. Like, uber cute, and it had depth to it. It wasn't just some rushed romance where I love you's are passed around and it ends. It had depth and it showed his (Brian's) feelings.

"We're not meant to love. Do you think that this is easy for me?" Brian inquired incredulously.

"You're not meant to love, but Matt loves Bree. He adores her and gives her whatever she wants. Same with the other masters. They treat their wives and girlfriends with respect and dignity, and they are always looking out for them. I have to do this all on my own!"

I absolutely adore that part. It has to be my favourite. Because you know, it was written well and to me, it was an important part.

This whole thing was absolutely lovely though, I mean it too, I really enjoyed it and I've read it probably three times now, but the plot was wonderful, and plus, you always write pretty damn amazing stories, with your amazing plots and ideas.

Astounding job, love. <3 :D