Wow this is awesome. I can't believe he did that to her. Hopefully everything will be fine i hope that nothing bad is happening with her mother though I do want to know why she fears her so.
God i LOVE pitch black and the chronicles of riddick... i think hes like my favorite movie character ever. I've been *dying* for someone to write a story on here about him or the movies.. and i think you are capturing it beautifully. I love this story! please continue someday :)
first to comment? hell yeahs haha welcome back love! this is a wonderful way to show us all that you still got it. damn this is going to be a crazy ride and i'm first in line to hop on it