Kaleidoscope - Comments

Oh my gosh, this was simply gorgeous. I'd like to give a massive, detailed comment picking out everything I loved about it but I'm too much in awe to string together coherent thoughts. The format was unlike anything else I've seen on Mibba and you pulled it off so well. It really linked with the title and theme of the story. And the imagery was so striking. I especially loved the bit about the world being made out of running sugar and melting glass. Just kdhfjfdkgjhfbhkgb. I loved it.

Fantastic job on this. :)

Really cool
Loved the line breaks

I believe my words have already been spoken. It's amazing~ simple as that. :D

I love the format of the story. I think it goes perfectly with the whole theme of the story. The fragments and grammar althought may be annoying in other stories, they really makes your story strong. Without them, you wouldn't get across the point as well so I commend you for that. It's a very lovely piece of work darling. Nice job.

You are lovely, just a lovely lovely person. You know that right? First off, the placement of the layout is great and against white it just looked so nice, I'm glad you chose your banner over mine because it looks so much nicer. I like the formatting, the breaks in sentences made it so much more really, like a struggle to see through this kaleidoscope, like reading and not knowing how to say a word and having to stall and sound it out, that's what it felt like to me. I keeps my attention too and that's a great thing. I can't pick one favorite line because I love them all. Your style is so fluent and comely, you did an amazing job.

Love it. So amazing. ^^