One Life To Live - Comments

YOU FINISHED THIS STORY ABOUT A YEAR AGO BUT I NEVER READ THE ENDING, WHY DIDN'T I READ IT?!?!!? Well by luck or chance or whatever I did just now! Loved it! Love you! yeah!

Just read your story it is marvelous:)
Please do a sequel!:D

oh my god. i was not expecting it to end :( i mean, it makes sense, but ...!

i LOVEE the idea of an epilogue! and LOVE the idea of keeping it mel and lance but at the same time, anybody you do is gonna be good :DDD

<3 youre sooo good! eek!

Sequel with Mel and lance maybe when they get married and have kids or an epilogue where he decides to give up that life or he gets kidnapped or something do anything to contintue this story

OH NO YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING THERE....

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*sigh* I love my readers!!! :)
Will be updating today, no worries!

OH MY GOD!! You can't leave it off like that! GAH!

.... one more time... PLEASE UPDATE FOR ME. I AM BEGGING YOU. :P

no no no. you can NOT leave me hanging like that! you HAVE to update asap. PLEASE. you want to know how crazy I am about this story? I just found it a couple of hours ago, and ever since then, I have been reading it non-stop, TWICE. yes, TWICE. so PLEASE for the love of God, Update the next chapter. PLEASE. I don't know if I can take waiting another day!! You are by far, my favorite writer on Mibba. BY FAR. And I just found you a couple of hours ago! *sighs* I have a feeling you won't update for a couple of days, so I am going to now go and read your other stories... BUT PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

:OO Oh hot damn. They're fucked

ahh! go go go! i want to know what happens! greg sets mel up to go with ed and then lance finds out and snaps and saves her then they live happily ever after? GREAT PLAN lol. but really youre amazing. i think i love you- thi is all i do. check and check and check and check :D
love, liz.

Oh fuck Greg, I never liked him. I don't like anyone with that name.
And oh noes Lance D:

Update soon! This story is super good! Can't wait for more!

oh oh oh! you mentioned me! yay :D lol.

this was so good! and greg is gonna be setting her up right? cuz of his "strained" voice? or the bad guy has him and is making him lure mel there!

im so excited :D lol.

<3

Shit I almost forgot this story existed!

btw LOVE LANCE (even if he is in the wrong line of business!)

OH MY GOD LAUREN UPDATE ! i have literally been reading this every spare seconnnddd i have gotten in the past 2 days- killing the battery on my kindle haha. i am ADDICTED and sosososossoo and because it just stopped :( its TOO GOOD to just stop !
love and inspiration floating your way through telekenesis!
<3 liz.

Boys *sigh*

This story is awesome! I started reading it awhile back but forgot to subscribe so I'm super glad I found it again and could catch up reading! Loving it so far, can't wait to read more :)