I Miss You. - Comments

Well, that was heart-breaking. I don't read too many bandfics because I'm not a fan of them, I think that they are mostly all the same. But, honestly, this one was different. The tapes were unique, so so so unique, I can't even explain how in love I am with the thought of thirteen cassette tapes being recorded for thirteen different people for all kinds of different notions as to why he would run away. It reminds me of the book Thirteen Reasons Why, I've never read it, but I've had friends tell me of its excellence. The overall feeling of unrequited love set the mood and tone for the story. You're very talented. I liked it a lot.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ;_____________;
ZACK DON'T GO. RIAN DOES LOVE YOU.
Fuck, Savannah, I'm crying again.
Why does he have to goo ;___;
He can't leave forever, he can't.
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Agreed with everything Abi says, I can't form a coherent comment.
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Amazing story <3

I love how straight edged the opening it. Zack’s mom’s crying and Rian thinks she’s being a bit of a drama queen. Brilliant. And I love the emotion dripping through the phone conversation. Zack’s mom’s really worried and upset whereas Rian’s a bit “um… What?” and then gets all worried. It’s kind of amazing.

The kind of coldness of the next few lines is wrapped around me. They’re realized Rian’s done something wrong and what with this box full of tapes now, it’s kind of hitting them all…

When Alex is reading through the list of tapes, my eyes filled with tears and a lump developed in my throat. Fuck. It was so hard not to cry at it!

The first two paragraphs of Zack’s tape to Rian are so fucking sad! Rian should have dumped Cassadee and dated Zack. For reals. They belong together! The next part of the letter kills me too. Rian is such an idiot for not seeing all the love in Zack’s eyes before! An absolute idiot!

The ending kills me ‘cause Rian does love him the way Zack wants him to, he really does and yet, Zack still leaves. I’m flooding with tears right now. It’s so upsettin yet so good!

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I really enjoyed this piece. It was full of emotion and reminded me of this little amazing book I read late last year where a girl killed herself but before she did, she sent out a box of tapes to go around eleven or maybe thirteen people so they all knew why she’d killed herself and how they were all connected.

Amazing. I really think it is just amazing.

The last line officially killed me.
The way Rian was feeling just. . . made me feel the same(I get a bit emotional when reading, sorry)
Amazing.