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  • alexander bernadotte

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    This was too adorable! I love the first chapter the best. Kasey sounds so awesome and I love Josh, even though we just met him, haha! I can so relate to this; summer can go by so fast and it totally sucks D: Anyways, this is so beautifully written. I'm shocked that it doesn't have as many comments as your other story does. It deserves a ton more :] Okay, chapter 2. Seriously, I awwwww-ed the entire time I was reading it. Josh is so cute! He's such a lovely character (:
    I'm definitely subbing to this and am looking forward to see what you have in store for this story (: Lovely job! <3
    November 14th, 2010 at 08:58pm
  • Cascade

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    Aww, that's cute. Great update. :3
    October 27th, 2010 at 03:48pm
  • Calling Back

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    love it!
    finally some Kase and Josh action ;)
    cant wait for more
    October 26th, 2010 at 07:21am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Aw, I can relate to the main character; I love summer, and it always seems to go by so fast. And like her I also enjoy it because it's stress free. :) Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D
    Oh, and thanks for the shout-out at the end of the chapter! I appreciate it! :D
    October 26th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    This is defintly a keeper.

    Update soon
    October 26th, 2010 at 12:54am
  • My-Tree

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    i loved this finally an original story that you CAN read :)
    October 26th, 2010 at 12:37am
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    Love the update :)
    And cool pictures of them
    October 25th, 2010 at 01:39pm
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    Love the update :)
    And cool pictures of them
    October 25th, 2010 at 01:39pm
  • Calling Back

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    i love it
    i like that its an original story with no celebs :)
    October 19th, 2010 at 07:00am
  • Nanook

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    Hm... sounds good. I like it. Loved the first chapter, and can't wait for more and to see what all else you have in store for this. :D
    Definitely... Subscribed! :D
    October 18th, 2010 at 02:56am
  • skinny love.

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    You tagged this is a Jacob Black story.
    I don't see where he'd come into this.

    Trying tagging your story to what it is actually about. (;
    October 17th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • JW94

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    I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!
    hehe it was a great introduction to introduce the main characters keep it up :)
    October 17th, 2010 at 04:41pm
  • sleepyhollow;

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    This sounds amazing :)
    I'm definately subscribing to this.
    I can't wait for the next update this, i really can't wait to see where you're planning on taking it :)
    <3
    October 17th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    I love it.
    Amazingly written and detailed, I can picture everything
    Update soon?
    I'd love pictures of them all :D
    October 17th, 2010 at 12:47am
  • Edged

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    I like it. A lot. It makes me think of soft things..Lol. That sounds wierd.
    October 16th, 2010 at 06:25pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    This is amazing Ana. I loved it. Post more soon please :)
    October 16th, 2010 at 04:50pm
  • idswimtheoceann

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    I like the first chapter,
    as Paul McCartney. said,
    you really did a good job with the imagery.
    October 16th, 2010 at 04:33pm
  • Cascade

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    Ahh, what a fail. x3;
    October 16th, 2010 at 04:17pm
  • Cascade

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    <font size="2"><font face="tahoma">A great start to the story. Please update? x33;</font></
    October 16th, 2010 at 04:17pm
  • conk

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    I love it. Absolutely beautifully written. I could really see the images you were trying to convey in my mind's eye. You have huge talent :]
    October 16th, 2010 at 02:47pm