You Left The Worst With Me - Comments

  • Edie15

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    This was good, a couple grammatical errors but I liked it :)
    April 17th, 2011 at 12:51am
  • came out swinging

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    this is story is really good, and you both are amazing writers. i can't wait for the next update!
    January 25th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • CA to NY

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    Hi :) I liked the story but it was hard to follow at some points and it seemed to switch from tense to tense. It was good but seemed really fast like everything happened really fast. Maybe spread it out between more chapters next time.
    (oh and umm i think you left some little words like [a, the, etc.] out but I could still understand it :) )
    January 9th, 2011 at 10:17pm
  • MaiKaley_May

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    This is a cute storyyyy:) I realllly liked it, will there be more:)
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:39am
  • YouClickedYourHeels

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    Cute story! Alex is a sweetheart (:
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:39am
  • butterfly.kisses.

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    Chapter three was great! Update soon!? :)
    December 22nd, 2010 at 02:46pm
  • lolamonito

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    i love your story. The only thing is, is that there are grammar errors. Haha sorry, I'm a grammar freak! :o
    December 22nd, 2010 at 12:39am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    three: Awesome way to introduce the guys. loved jack's introducation and what he called rian. Wondering what's going to happen in the next chapter? Can't wait to read it.
    December 20th, 2010 at 05:49pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: Another great chapter with great descriptions. Love the story pic and how long this chapter was. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.
    December 20th, 2010 at 05:35pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    great start to a great story. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out in the next chapter.
    December 20th, 2010 at 05:28pm
  • Ash The Bash

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    Ahhh! The perfect scenario! Thank you!
    December 18th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • alwaysallforyou

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    It's really good :)
    December 17th, 2010 at 03:44am
  • NADIAwashington

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    I like this story alot! u should continue it :)
    December 12th, 2010 at 03:43pm
  • SmallTownStar

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    I love it!
    This story has huge potential!
    Update soon?(:
    December 5th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • agnisays

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    waaaaaaw adorable ...
    Can't wait to see next chapter :D
    awww ada cassadee aku sukasukasuka hey mondayy !!
    November 29th, 2010 at 06:37am
  • aybaybay

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    I think its really great.. i love.. love.. love.. the plot! Comment on my story please! i dont have any comments
    November 28th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • xHowLovely

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    This is really good, I like it. :)
    November 25th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • butterfly.kisses.

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    i like it :) cannot wait for chapter three
    November 20th, 2010 at 04:50pm
  • Keeley_Jayne

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    I like it! I can't wait till Alex comes in :3
    November 20th, 2010 at 06:00am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I really like this story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter =D
    November 14th, 2010 at 05:47am