I Want to Fly Away - Comments

It's the simple pleasures that make our troubles disappear. I love your character's. The way she always dreams of flying when things go wrong, when she needs something more. It's like I could almost feel her soul flying with the birds when she closed her eyes. It was a stunning piece, that I completely adored. You packed so much into so little, quite a talent.

The layout was so beautiful! I loved your background, and the overall theme of it. I may have to ask you to make me a story layout sometime. =p

Thank you so much for entering this contest.

This was an interesting story. Was this supposed to be a picture prompt contest?
This story was descriptive and vivid, like a tv in my head!
You should make this a chaptered story!