This really was amazing.<3 Your detail was nice and the flow was just stunning. I find myself wanting to leave this huge, adoring comment because this peice definitely shows that you're a talented, desrerving writer, but I also find that I'm pretty much speechless. I'll leave you with one word to tie up this comment, like dropping a bomb, (:
This is amazing. You're fifteen years old and have the mindset to write like a fourty year old, well educated woman. Your words and sentences just come together. You definatley set up a picture in my mind when I read your writing. It's incredible. =]
Brilliant.<3 (: