Tease! Teeeease. That was amazing and suspenseful in every way. You could feel her tension in wanting him, and his in wanting her. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
*drool* I think I'm in love with this. This was absolutely the greatest Kakashi one-shot I have ever read in the entire world! (And I have read a few handfulls) I loved it. I loved it. I loved it. You're awesome for writing this. Omg.
Oh, dear Lord. This may be the most perfectly written piece of literature I have ever read, ever!
The teasing, the guessing game. My entire body was tense the entire time, you made me FEEL the suspense.
You've got talent, wonderful, beautiful, and all sorts of other adjectives that I can't seem to find in this mess you've made my mind, talent. Never stop writing.
There was NOTHING I could find that I didn't like about this. You've made me one happy girl, deary. <3
That was amazing and suspenseful in every way. You could feel her tension in wanting him, and his in wanting her.
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.