This is incredibly sad. But I loved it! I like how the sound of the beeps, which I'm assuming is her brothers heart machine thing, mean a lot to her. And how she thinks about how he is a fighter. I don't really like the layout. It's would be great for like a good romance that was upbeat and everything. But this is a sad story, I think it needs dull and dark colors. But that's just me. It was really a great story. :)
December 13th, 2010 at 10:11pm