Am I Pretty Yet? - Comments, page 2

Sincerely Yours (200)

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This is intresting...:)

October 24th, 2010 at 12:08am

Isabella Sykes . (100)

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wow. I love your writing, I can see this story is going to be fabulous.
keep it up. <3

October 23rd, 2010 at 11:24pm

oathkeeper. (100)

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From the small portion you've posted, it's really quite wonderful. Completely, and easily relatable.
I'm eager to see where this goes, you left quite the cliff hanger. I adore it.
<3

October 23rd, 2010 at 09:31am

stereophonics28 (100)

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WOw - I like it. I mean, it could've been about anything, but then POW - it's very effective :)
x

October 22nd, 2010 at 06:54pm

wicked ways (100)

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Wow. That was so powerful. The last line really struck me! Short, but to the point. I'm not a big fan of that layout cos there's no banner. :/ Other then that, I love this and I'm so subbing! Update soon. <3

October 22nd, 2010 at 06:35pm

ladyhawke. (100)

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I love your layout, it's so simple but it works really well with the story. Also, at first I wasn't quite sure what this girl was doing which I really admired about your beginning. Keep writing(:

October 22nd, 2010 at 12:22pm

lacrimosa. (100)

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i love this already.
mas, por favor!

October 22nd, 2010 at 04:47am

Star Crossed Lover (100)

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Keep writing. I like it.

October 22nd, 2010 at 04:45am