I like the color scheme of the layout and the background picture you choose for the story content. However, with the background like that it made the text harder to read and I had to highlight over to read.
Even though this was short there was a lot going on. I like that you did not babble or go on about unrelated information. You gave us a really good drabble. It’s a bit confusing and I had to read it twice to fully understand. However, I still like it so don’t worry.
Even though this was short there was a lot going on. I like that you did not babble or go on about unrelated information. You gave us a really good drabble. It’s a bit confusing and I had to read it twice to fully understand. However, I still like it so don’t worry.
I think you did a pretty good job.