It was really good! :)
June 8th, 2011 at 12:26am
First of all, for some inexplicable reason I really like the title. I don't know why, but it's catchy and doesn't give too much away. Plus I love the ring to it...I dunno xD I'm rambling now, haha.
It wasn’t easy to join our group, nor were we looking for additional members.
Ooh, nice. I know girls like that, or at least who probably think like that, so that was a cool touch.
Jackie screamed, and that led to a chain reaction of screams from Marie and me as well.
Haha! The chain reaction. I totally know what that's like, too. Usually I'm the one who joins in the chain. Once someone screams, I can't help it.
We stood there staring at her face which was blue, and her eyes were bloodshot and popped halfway out of the sockets!
That thing with her eyes is freaky especially to me. I have an eye-touching phobia so anything with the eyes is automatically scary as hell, lol.
Great job! Good luck in the contest :)