When You Were Mine - Comments

I really do love this story.
It's very original.
I am torn between Garrett or Kennedy for Adrianne.
Her and Garrett still like each other, but her and Kenny are so cute, and I don't want him to get hurt.
I love this.
I hope you update soon(:

First off, I love the layout. However, the font kind of hurts my eyes because it's so small. I don't suggest making it huge or anything. Just a tad bit bigger? Actually, it's probably just me and my poor eyesight.

Anyhow, so far, the storyline is good. Kind of cliche and typical, but nothing major or anything. I tend to have a guilty pleasure for these types of stories anyway so in the end, it doesn't much matter to me.

I've only read the first chapter so far but I intend on reading the rest when I have a chance.

its cute he keeps touching his cheek(:

a guy blushing is so cute(: kenny is general is sooo cute(:

its cute how much adrianne and garret know eachother
I take that back maybe she knows just as much bout kenny maybe

. I think she felt awkward like I did, with me holding her hand and everything.

^ that doesnt make sense why would he feel arkward

Her jealous friend.
^ I love that line

update soon

I love the outfit(:

they are such cute to gather!(: I think I change to team Kennedy

I slapped is leg, and mouthed an 'ow.'
^ doesnt make sense

he is so cute especially calling her babe(: I would love to have him

I started laughing about her laughing, because I don't get why she was? ha ha

and gave Kennedy one of those 'man-hugs'.
^ I like that line ha ha

I thought garret knew about them sleeping togather when he said so how bout u 2

oh my they are both perfect for her..idk what team I am on ha ha
but I love this story
off to read the next chapter

Kenny is so cute(: I could imagine him with his hand over his mouth laughing, it would be so cute<3

Kennedy, being his helpful self, guided my hands, just so I won't cut myself.
^cuteness again<3

I seriously can imagine like everything that goes on in your story(: That is sooo great<3

"Oops, sorry!" He said, sitting up as he rubbed my head. "I hope I didn't shook your pretty brain."
^ that should be shake

I like when people kiss to shut the other up(:

atleast he used a condom ha ha

I wasn't with anyone, and so is Kennedy.
^ would make sense if it is neither is kennedy

also I love how she keeps assuring us she isn't a whore

I can't wait for garret to find out(: ha ha more drama

chapter 6 here I come

Chapter four was good, I don't really have any more comments besides that.

I smirked and brought down the half empty root beer float.
^ I liked that, it is something that someone would really do and I can imagine

I also love how it has their convo(: I wanted to know more about it

what flirts! ha ha

I don't know why but I like how you named the movie
I also like how you do pictures of things but then again it might be better if you just describe them

he calls her babe a lot, ha ha I know you already know that just saying

it's cute how she liked tweaked when he covered her eyes

"If Garrett's going to be there with Rachael, then no thanks." I told him while I played with his hair.
^ comma(:

and opened the light on the porch.
^ that doesn't really make sense

Off to read the next chapter

His POV yay!(:

I wasn't ashamed or guilty by what I just did. I missed kissing her precious lips. Kissing her was like a breath of fresh air - I felt different emotions while I was kissing her; hope, desire, passion, love...
^ amazing<3 I'm so jealous of your descriptions

ugh I'm getting aggregated ha ha they need to get together

"It's not like I don't want to keep Angel, Kenny. I don't know, I just forget to drop her by Adrienne's house." I told him as I indifferently surfed the web.
^ that should be a comma

"I know what you're going to say, and no. I just really do keep on forgetting." I told him. Man, sometimes I hate the way Kennedy could easily figure stuff out.
^ comma

anything in quotes before it says that someone said should be a comma

Okay, okay, I agree with you about sharing Angel. But... I really have no use for the stuff anymore." I replied as I stood up, and grabbed the box full of the old, sentimental stuff under my computer table.
^ comma

I closed my eyes, and the first thing I saw was Adrienne's face; her smile, and captivating green eyes. I wanted to open my eyes, because I find it weird to think about her, and at the same time, I didn't want to because I missed looking at her. I wish I could kiss her again... hold her in my arms...
^ Aw(:

I'm debating who's team I am on, ha ha
I think she should get with kenny then get back with Garret
so team garret? ha ha
off to read chapter 3

when in fact it was still way back in December.
^ I don't really understand why the still is there

"I don't want to ruin your perfect outfit." She said, dusting off my bolero and dress.
^ that should be a comma hun(:

I think it is really cute how you explain gavin and travis relationship with her it makes me kind of feel it like they are cute older bros<3

The Arizona sun greeted me. The sun's rays hit my skin,
^ that's a good description

The smell of hot coffee and cinnamon greeted me. I inhaled the sweet scent, and I realized how much I missed this place.
^ good description again(: u have such good sensory details(:

I love her little side comments in her head(:

My face got all screwed up bout him getting married
um no that's not going to work out
they are going to get together(:

I can imagine things that are going on(: That's amazing(:

This is so lovely<3 I love it. I hate how he kissed her though, it will just make things worse. Going to read the second chapter

i read this whole story today in my study hall today. i love it. its soo good.

I hate how your stories don`t have very detailed comments :( I will comment on this soon(:

this story is so great. i randomly found it on tumblr the other day and i love it, especially since garrett's my favorite member of the maine. this story deserves way more comments and stuff then it has. :)

this story is so good!

amazing story!
i really want her to be with garrett again!