June 21st, 2011 at 03:06am
My mom was trying to talk to me, but I was reading it haha. I really wanted to know what was going to happen, so bad that I got a good slap on the head from her lol. I think you used the picture in a good way. I was very curious to see what you’d come up with and I never would have thought it would be written from a guys point of view about a girl.
I especially love the quote in the summary. It really shines a light on the atmosphere of the story. I love it even more when you brought it into the story. I actually giggled that he yelled it. Romantic in a morbid atmosphere.
Bravo.
You did a good job. :]