I love this so much do far! Even though there's really only one chapter... XD But seriously, you don't know how sick I am of stories in which the girl sees the guy and immediately becomes infatuated with him. Yours is different; all she thought of him as was cute and I really liked that for a change. It will make the character development great, so I'm really looking forward to it!
In other news, I fell to sleep during Twilight too. I think it will be great to hear about McKenna too; there's barely any stories with her in them and I think that it's kind of refreshing.
Your writing is amazing! I love it! And by the way, I love stories where the brother is really protective. ...Especially if it's Brian
love this so far. really different setting from other stories i've read. especially ones with brian or zacky. keep up the good work and cant wait for the next update :)
I'm looking forward to reading this! and I know that there isn't a chapter for it yet but I just wanted to be the first to comment. XD Lovely banner and layout. <3