I Need an Angel and I Think It's You - Comments

wow! I didn't sees that coming either! Awesome work! I hope you update soon ;)

I didnt see that coming. Great update honey

OMG, I did NOT see this coming. W-O-W.

Hope you update again soon.

cool, I hope you update again soon!

OMG! This was just to cute. I love Eli, I wouldn't mind having him for a brother!
Fernando is so sweet! I love how comfortable he is with her, I don't think I would
have been too comfortable meeting someone for the first time. i really loved how
you ended this chapter, it really grabbed my attention (not that it was slipping!)
So many things are going through my mind right now! I want to know what happens
next!

Love it. Cant wait for more

I love Eli! He's so young at heart I just love him!

Seraphina seems really special. What's the secret though?

This was great! I loved all your characters, especially Eli and of course, Fernando ;) Eli is so adorable, he's so energetic and so immature! I'd love to be his sister. I think he's very sweet, and i love how he sticks up, backs up Sera. I found it refreshing that you didn't make them the kind of siblings that can't stand each other. You started off great, and you were able to successfully pull me in. There were a couple of typos here and there, though.

“Ola please don’t give me the same treatment like our parents”

“Okay I will try” --> these two sentences need a period after the end.

and He yelled an ok --> "ok" should be O.K. or okay

Otherwise, it was great,baby!

I'm curious about what's wrong with her, and why she wants to keep it a secret. Also, I love Sera, she's an interesting character. I'd really like to find out about Fernando's character, but I'm sure there's more to come. Until then, I can't wait!

p.s. although I'm going to subscribe, can you tell me when you update? I don't check my e-mail too often!

It's very good!:-D
I like it very much.:-D