VERY GOOD! Not what I expected at all when I thought up this sentance. I loved it, it was amaizing. I love how you made it seem so mysterious in the beginning, making me wonder what was going on, is he going to do something stupid like suicide or what? I like how you made it bungie jumping. :D You made a few mistakes. Go through see if you can find them, if you can't i can email you what you did wrong and you can fix them. But Great Job! I loved it!
November 19th, 2010 at 05:02am