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  • MakingMeFamous

    MakingMeFamous (150)

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    I`m a little OCD and don`t like the writing on the right but thats just my weird opinion

    You have good descriptions

    this is the kind of thing you don`t want to stop reading
    I keep reading because I want to find out what`s going on(:

    I love how the secound chapter is written quite different then the first though I like the first too

    Yeah, I only read the first two chapters, I will read more if you really want me to
    December 8th, 2010 at 02:27am
  • youngbae.

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    You know how I only think of these two like brothers, right? Well I wanted to check this out anyway, and I'm very happy I did. <3
    That first Chapter was mindblowing, and I could picture TOP moving through all of that, much like he did when he starred in Into The Fire, and his character had to go through that. And....that was a prologue right? Smiley It...it sounded like he was about to die, and that he got shot in the leg, and then the arm.
    The rest of the chapters that follow are marvelous. I love that GD is the one that puts up the paper lanterns, and that he makes paper dragons (How appropriate. tehe).

    Plus your writing is so beautiful. <3 The descriptions are so fluid-like, and you paint imagery so beautifully.
    I just can't get over your writing style. It's gorgeous. In Love

    This was one of my favorite parts:
    Jiyong dipped his knees and bent forward, so his eyes caught Seunghyun’s downturned gaze. “The lanterns told me,” he whispered, resting a thin finger on his light pink smile as if telling a secret. “They like to talk a lot,” he informed the other man. “Not much to do all day besides talk. They tell me lots of secrets. They tell me lots about you too. They like you.”

    In Love In Love So cuuuuuute.

    Though I only think of everyone in Big Bang as bros for life (lmfao), I'mma still read this. Cause it's beautiful. <3
    December 6th, 2010 at 03:01pm
  • stark

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    This story just ... blows my mind.

    It's so simple, yet so complex; real, but fantastic. Concrete, yet so abstract. Beautiful vocabulary and a nice, flowing pace. And so inspiring. I just love it.
    November 22nd, 2010 at 08:52pm