A Sunrise On the East Side - Comments

  • MusicKillsThePain

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    its over?! awwwww :( well, it was a good way to end it. So adorable! <3
    July 14th, 2011 at 01:03am
  • Hipsterism

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    I can't believe that this is over!!! I LOVE reading this story!! I will definitely miss this!! I really hope you write another Jack story :) xoxo
    July 13th, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    it's over?!?!? gahhh i loved this story!!!!
    July 13th, 2011 at 03:41am
  • erratic

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    Jeez Louise.
    I absolutely adored reading this lovely story. The dynamic you built between Jack and Kenley was nothing short of fantastic. I love how you ended the story on such a high note for the both of them.
    July 12th, 2011 at 08:30am
  • a.lovely.disaster

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    Is it really over???? Say it ain't so? As much as I love sequels, I can't bring myself to ask you to put Kenley and Jack through anything else. I love them the way they are right now. The ending was perfect. It wrapped up loose ends, was sweet, and cute, and perfectly written. This entire story is perfect. Jack and Kenley are one of my favorites and I just can't get over how amazing of a story line this is. But I am excited for Clarke and Alex again. I can't wait for it.
    July 12th, 2011 at 05:38am
  • loki-d

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    I'm so sad it's over :'-( ~oh the infinite creyz~ This story was one of the best I have read ever. You are an amazing writer. I would ask for a sequel, but I don't know that I want it to end any other way. It was perfect. (-:
    July 11th, 2011 at 06:25am
  • revenge_is_mine

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    awww this was cute. i love it when they get all couple-y
    July 5th, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • MusicKillsThePain

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    I'm SOOOO glad I found you again after being away from this site for almost a year. You truly are an amazing writer - the best I've discovered from this site or any other. Really, if you published a book, I would buy it. THAT good. You write everything in such perfect detail, I can actually picture each scene in my head. This story is flawless. As are the other ones of yours I've read in the past.
    &sidenote, I LOVE craig owens & d.r.u.g.s! Just had to add that in there (:
    July 5th, 2011 at 06:37am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    Have I ever told you how much I love Kenley and Jack together?! Because I do!
    They're just too adorable :)
    And I don't care if it was short or fillerish....it was still amazing in my opinion!
    I loved how Jack took notice that he was the one to cure Kenley's insomnia. I believe he did as well!!
    Even if there were nights where she slept well without him there.
    I can't wait to see what's next for them!
    <3 Kelsey
    July 4th, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • Hipsterism

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    Looove the update :3
    And I get what you are saying about Holly :) She just sems too sweet of a person to hate
    I can't remember if I read the other Alex fanfic or not.
    if I haven't, I will catch up and read the third enstallment
    July 4th, 2011 at 07:07pm
  • erratic

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    Aww, I'm stoked that the trip to Vegas went well and that Jack and Kenley have reached such a comfortable point in their relationship. It's truly adorable :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 03:03pm
  • a.lovely.disaster

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    I don't care if this was short and fillerish, because it didn't even come off as much, I loved every second of it! I think this chapter was kinda the wrap up and the tying up of loose ends after Vegas. And the fluffy-ness of Kenley and Jack is just so damn adorable! You better not do anything else to them or I will be so sad! I believe I've said this before but I will say it again, I love Kenley's character. And Jack's whole declaration of being an asshole, that took me just as off guard as it took Kenley. I wasn't really expecting him to say anything like that, but it just shows that they're comfortable enough with each other to talk about that. And the insomnia!!!! I'm glad it came up again because I FULLY give Jack credit for curing Kenley's insomnia, lol. Eeep, I can't wait to see what's next for them and I can't wait for the next update!
    July 4th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • talk.is.cheap

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    I took a long hiatus from mibba and this story was the first on my list to catch up on. I'm speechless with your style of writing and I still envy you for your amazing plotlines and how you carry everything out. Trust me, you won't be the only sad one to see this finish :(
    July 1st, 2011 at 09:06am
  • Hipsterism

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    I'm glad you didn't make holly a bitch like most people do to Lisa in Alex stories.
    I will be sad to see this story come to a close because it is one of my top five favorites :D
    I will definitely be reading any of your other stories that are written after this :3
    June 29th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    I'm happy to see that Holly wasn't a bitch in this chapter. lol. I like her as well (even if she broke Jack's heart) haha.
    I loved how all of Kenley's worries were thrown out the window and everything worked out perfectly.
    I felt like it was a great night in my opinion!
    I couldn't help but smile when Jack was reassuring her that everything would be fine on the way there.
    They are seriously perfect for each other :D
    Looking forward to the next update!!
    June 27th, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    awww this was really nice. i'm glad everything worked out all peachy :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 03:44pm
  • a.lovely.disaster

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    I should have see that coming. I really should have seen that fucking coming. I don't really know how to feel. Bad for Kenley or pissed off at Jack. If both is an option I'm diving for it because this just got fucked up. Now, before I launch into my rant, I want to say this, I loved the gifts they gave each other. The adorable factor of this story is insane and I love it!
    Okay, rant time. Wtf was Jack thinking? Does it not seem, oh I don't know, fucked up that he wanted to take his NEW girlfriend to go and meet his STILL girlfriend who he needs to break up with?!?! What is going through his mind? Does he honestly think Holly will take that well? Does he think Kenley really wants to be apart of any of that? Just, ugh! I'm annoyed with him for not taking care of this sooner. Technically, he's been cheating on Holly for so long now and Kenley's the other women. Just gah! I love this story and all, but it frustrates me but that just makes me love it more because I can't wait to see what happens! Eeep, update!
    June 23rd, 2011 at 07:39am
  • revenge_is_mine

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    OH SHIT kenley vs. holly shit is going to go down!
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    I agree with a.lovely.disaster!!!!
    That was absolutley adorable!!
    I'm just so happy that they are finally together :D
    I'm glad Kenley was understanding of the Jack's invitation for her to come to Vegas with him.
    It could have turned out worse.
    Looking forward to the next chapter!!
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:09am
  • a.lovely.disaster

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    AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That. Was. The. Most. Freaking. Cutest. Adorablest. Chapter. EVER! Jack and Kenley are so freakin adorable! I loved when Jack didn't open his eyes and just asked Kenley if last night really happened when he did, cutest thing ever! They're just...GAH! I can't even express in words how happy this chapter made me! Eeep, I can't wait for the next update!
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:42pm