The Seven Deadly Sins - Comments

Amazing story!! im only on chapter 5 but im absolutely loving it. keep writing :D totally agreed with the other comments, you have an amazing writing style. its a gift!

PLease update! whoa vampires and lycans? amazing twist in the plot...witches!!! Aww I like Ivan and Elizabeth together :(

I have to agree that Drake does sound a bit harsh and even evil... but Elizabeth is strong and I'm sure she can give him a run for his money... however seeing a giant vampire feeding frenzy will surely make both of them emotionally unstable.
My heart only slightly breaks for Lauralaina, most of me is accusing her. She could have taught them and instead she hid their whole being from themselves. She could have had a better relationship with both and they might have actually been a close family had she been truthful to them and taught them what they are.
Brilliant chapter, as always! I again do love how it's in their mothers point of view. The hard women who seemed made of stone is now putty in her husbands arms crying. Who would have ever thought...
Can't wait to see what's going to happen to the poor girls in the next chapter.
Keep writing! Your wonderful!
Can't wait!
-Liz

NO MORE IVAN?!?!
I'M GONNA CRY!
Seriously gonna cry I want the Charminator and King Drake just sounds evil.... SO EVIL!
I mean when they created the word evil they had someone EXACTLY like him in mind.
And I adore the last chapter by the way especially because it's done in Elizabeths mothers point of view. It was so heart crushing, my heart felt like it had been pulled out of my chest! It was breaking for Lauralaina really it was really sad. And she didn't even get to say good bye....
I'm a little confused as to why Rosalie has to be there I thought she was going to the Lycans...
Oh and I want Ruben to die viciously...VERY VERY viciously...and I mean VERY, he's just so nasty, and I thought they were going to burn them not murder them...cuz I was expecting Ruben going up in flames (yeah that was a gay joke...but I don't hate gays, just Ruben)
-LTW
Please write more.
CHARMINATOR!!!!!!

Love the new chapter, as always! Your work is so wonderful! Can't wait for another brilliant chapter!

I know I comment EVERY chapter but I can't help it!
Chapter 10 was just smashing :p
AND THE CHARMINATOR IS BACK! (back again)
How cute is it that she's imagineing her perfect match, one who sounds amazing :p
Hope Chapter 11 comes out fast I'm dying to know what's going to happen at the ball.
-LTW

AHHHH CHAPTER NINE!!!
Yeah chapter nine couldn't get any better, figures the Charminator had something planned...Drake I didn't expect to be their though that totally caught me off guard, anyways chapter ten should be AMAZING as always. Cannot wait as always wonder what's gonna happen with Rosalie I mean she's sleeping with Ruben and she's supposed to be betrothed to...Lycans?
Chapter Eight when Elizabeths mom told Drake he'd never get Elizabeth to love him I was screaming "YEAH! YOU TELL THAT COCKY BASTARD HAHAHAHA!!!"

I absolutely LOVE the new chapter, it makes me wonder what's going to happen next and how Drake plans to win her heart...

it has indeed beautiful twists and turns ..i enjoy it much more than alot

I agree with I_like_to_write, your writing style is so amazing! You write in the style of the time, and it's amazing that you can do that. It is seriously a gift! I love your stories, I strongly suggest that you turn this into a book! I'm positive it would sell easily! I know I would buy multiple copies... because of course the old ones would get worn from use... :)
You are very talented, I would even call it a gift. I've never seen anyone write like you and I LOVE your writing style! I've read the whole story over and over, I can't wait for you to put out the next chapter. I do love a good read.

your loyal follower from quizilla and devoted fan,
-Liz

OK I've read chapter eight nine times!!! I'm so in love with your writing style!!!!

Thank you so much!
I'm so glad you're enjoying it
The next update should be up soon =]
And it will only get more interesting, I assure you

YAY FIRST TO COMMENT!!!
I love your story it's positively amazing!
I love how you've constructed your characters and how you didn't just come out and say HEY WERE VAMPIRES AND WITCHES!!! I love absolutely LOVE stories like that!!!
I am absoutely in love with Ivan he's just such a complex character...he knows she's betrothed to his brother and he still persues her with full force I really wanna call him the charminator :p