In Venere Veritas: There are wounds that are not meant to heal. - Comments

Also, just a quick question that I forgot to ask in the last comment: Do you happen to know what 'In Venere Veritas' means? I've seen a few stories with this title where the authors have had no idea, so it tends to go off on a tangent that has nothing to do with the title. Just curious :)

This really is brilliant, love. I find the lack of feedback somewhat disconcerting, because it's definitely worthy of it. You're a very talented writer. I love how you've built the relationships up between the characters this early in the proceedings, it's genius. You've come up with a very original concept that most people would probably have trouble with, but you've made it work for you in the best possible way. I love stories like yours, mainly because they show that the author can think for themselves. Too many times have I seen the same old tired storyline with only the names changed, but this is something I've never seen before. Keep it up, love, you truly are brilliant.

I really loved it, yet again. The idea's original, and one that appeals to me. The second chapter was just as well written as the first. I can only wish to be able to tell a story the way you can :D
I like the fact that Ville's such a gentleman, it's a great contrast to the sexist bullying that comes from most of the others ;]
I'm really sorry that I didn't get to read this yesterday, but my internet ran out 8D

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-Katie

Epic win. I love the idea of her being a roadie, and the fact that she told her arsehole superior to fuck off. It was a really nice introduction, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Definite subscrption :D

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-Katie

yay first comment. and i like it so far. keep it up!!!!!!!