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I loved reading this. It's weird because it's about something I would never, ever watch in movie or series form. The writing just kept me hooked, my eyes following every line and space, every italics and underline and bold letters, every detail and every word.

I loved it. It's good. You can expect one more subscriber in your subscription box.

Chocolate strawberries and kiwi dolls,
Luna.

I just read this from beginning to end and I really, really like it, especially the note that Amber left for her that warned her about the dangers of Mia and Ana.
Update soon?

Oh my god, that's just so sad. Seriously.
When I heard that Autumn wrote a note, I thought it would be something bitchy and manipulitve. I thought she was just one of those girls that would bring those things to the grave- try to ruin people's lives even after they passed.
When I read what she wrote though, it was just heartbreaking. Because now that she's passed, she wants to sort of teach her friend a lesson, show her what could happen.
I don't expect the girl to all of a sudden get better, no, but I do hope she takes this as a sort of wake-up call of some sorts.
As always, of course, you've amazed me with this amazing story.
I was totally not expecting this at all. :D

Aw, that was pretty sad. I have a new respect for Autumn...mostly because she's against Ana. It's so thrilling, the story feels like it's in one of those movie scenes where u weren't supposed to find something but you did and now someones off to kill you. Or something like that. LOL. I can't wait
to see how she reacts to the letter! Update soon :D

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I've read Glass by Ellen Hopkins before, I absolutely adore her.

I just overall really love psychotic/mental disorder stories, I'm really into these kinds of things.
And this really attracted me.
The layout is very pretty,it wasn't very distracting but very pleasing to the eye.

There were no mistakes, grammatically, and spelling wise.
This style of writing always gives either the essential, or insignificant details, as the person is meticulous, I liked it a lot.

It's like giving someone a peek inside this girl's overly-conscious mind. (:
I'd say making it a bit more descriptive, that's just me though, cause I really like descriptions.
Good job(:

At first I thought it was odd that your chapters were so short, because I expected a long narrative, something more traditional. But having read a few of them, I now kind of like the bite-sized chunks, if you'll forgive the pun.

It's very simple and not amazingly detailed, but I think that can work if what you're going for is a kind of free-form rather than a standard story. The voice is good, too. This bit creeped me out:

"Those black cigarette pants will fit me
And it will be just in time for Christmas.

Wouldn’t that be a lovely gift? "

Very effective.

I'm not sure where this style would work outside the internet, but it was catchy enough to read, and so I guess it serves its purpose.

Well done.

I love this! I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!

I actually clicked on this story like a week or so ago, but I didn’t read it. I don’t know why though. But I went to the pimping board and I saw it and it sounded pretty interesting and bam! It’s like fate; a second chance.

The layout is so attracting and alluring and so is the banner. I knew the minute that I clicked and read the first chapter that I would love the story. I absolutely adore the format that it’s written in. That’s why I love Ellen Hopkins’ books so much; her format and writing style is so amazing and easy to read.

Anyway, your story is fantastic. I’m sorry that you’ve had your own personal problems with these disorder. Oh, and I should add that I normally don’t read eating disorder fics because they’re usually the same, but yours is totally unique and I love it.

Gah, you should be so proud of yourself for this story. *subscribing also*

This story is really good! I already subscribed :) and I can't wait to find out what the note says!

Gaahhh this amazing! =] I love Ellen Hopkins' books&&I really love this, it's amazing&&sorta helps me understand some things..

Update soon:]!

Oh gosh xP loveed it! Thanks for making it extra long! You said there was a suicide letter tho.. I was expecting it :o !! Update soon :D

I'm Going to stalk yooooouuuuuu. Loove Maria <33333333

im addicted. please keep writing for me!

Oh
My
Gosh
My dear, where has this been my whole life?! Everything just flows so smoothly, and as someone who has an issue like this, I can really relate to almost everything going on. I love how realistic Ana is. My heart goes out for Iris. You've got some great talent missy, I'm soo looking foward for more :D

Moremoremoremoremore.
I love it. I want more.
I've been wanting to write a story in this style, but I doubt I'd pull it off... D:

For the most part, to be honest, I'm not a big fan of the entire "Ana" sort of stories. There's quite a few. But yours, I don't know, yours is just so different. I love the way that you've constructed it in this sort of... poetic way, that really compliments the whole Ana ordeal in a way where everything short and choppy but it gets the story across. And it sort of gives it this disorganized what-the-hell-is-happening sort of feel to it, and you mentioend in your story that it just happened. I don't know, I really liked it. The thoughts are just so real.

The struggle to be skinny isn't a pretty one, and you really show that.

I love how she calls them jealous of her, and how she's just so consumed by her twisted thoughts it's like there's nothing that can affect her. And the fact that Mia's been hanging around really makes me wonder, the suicide note too. This is an amazing story, seriously.
I didn't have time for people like that. Those people never made time for me.
One of my favourite quotes from the entire story.
This is beautiful, aha. :D

Wow. Just, wow. This is so.... perfectly, enchantingly, amazing! You are truely an amazing writer, and I wish I had the skills as you to write such a beautiful, thought provoking story!(:

What? I was about four chapters behind, and I was so into it. Then it stops right there! If each chapter didn't already have a cliffhanger, I'd say this last one definitely did. So much going on..her brother, Autumn, Ryne, plus she's grounded. It's all making my head spin in anticipation! but I won't bother you because it was such a satisfying chapter, yet I'm still hungry for more xP

I likee this story lots. Okay, some people can't really pull off the s triking stuff out in their stories but it's great in this one. I like the short chapters, and who it's kind of in poetic verse style. I can't wait for more. :) Subscribing.

This is seriously the most amazing thing I've ever read on here.
If this were published, it would definitely enter my list of top 5 favorite books.

I must say, it's very well written and kept me involved completely. That's something I need to avoid going downstairs to the party and... well that doesn't matter. Thanks for the story, keep writing.