September 16th, 2011 at 11:38pm
I'm not a fan of premade layouts but I thought it suited the story and the banner really went well though I'll suggest on resizing the picture so it fits. I really adored your summary, it's so true and it's very reminiscent of the real Titanic survivors' thoughs, of about sailing to a far off land to make their own destiny and fortune only to be met with fate D;
Aww, this was really well written and you have a knack for describing things perfectly and their emotions just jumped off the page. Dismissive feelings, shock, horror, happiness etc. They were all experienced and we saw them really vividly. This just leaves me wanting more and it'll be so cool I'd you actually developed this into an actual story! Great job :)
This was really well written, your details were good. I could almost picture it in my head. You really showed their emotions in this, thats really good.
Overall this is a really good one-shot :)