Titanic - Comments

  • Fantasy Monroe

    Fantasy Monroe (100)

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    This was really good. At first I thought it would be like the movie but it wasn't at all. I mean in some ways it was, but you made it different which is good. I will admit when I was younger I loved Titanic but not anymore.

    This was really well written, your details were good. I could almost picture it in my head. You really showed their emotions in this, thats really good.

    Overall this is a really good one-shot :)
    September 16th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • the power of justice

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    I'm not a fan of premade layouts but I thought it suited the story and the banner really went well though I'll suggest on resizing the picture so it fits. I really adored your summary, it's so true and it's very reminiscent of the real Titanic survivors' thoughs, of about sailing to a far off land to make their own destiny and fortune only to be met with fate D;

    Aww, this was really well written and you have a knack for describing things perfectly and their emotions just jumped off the page. Dismissive feelings, shock, horror, happiness etc. They were all experienced and we saw them really vividly. This just leaves me wanting more and it'll be so cool I'd you actually developed this into an actual story! Great job :)
    September 13th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • iron and graphite;

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    Wow, I can't believe there's no comments on this. I've only seen parts of the movie, but this was very well- written. I'm not even a fan of Titanic, but I loved this. At first, I thought it would just be a short little recap thingy of the movie, but it was amazing, there was plenty of detail put into it, and it was awesome, I could picture every thing at every moment perfectly. I loved the banner, too, all in all, this was pretty awesome, and leaves me wanting to read more.

    I really did enjoy this, though, keep writing[:
    August 4th, 2011 at 06:47pm