i like this idea lots and lots; but like the others said jaxin seems like a little bit of a dick xD also in the last chapter he called her rory? idk if that was deliberate, but it confused me so yeah xD
I really like the story but it was easier to read when the text was centred in the page and not along the right. Sorry I know it's picky, but anyway. Love the story! Making my Summer holidays more interesting.
Hey! I just stumbled across this story and it's really awesome so far. I'm definitely interested to find out what'll happen to Rory! And it's so rare to find a story on mibba with an interesting plot and no spelling errors :)
You have a minor mistake on Chapter 3 though. 'Ethan was player' I think you meant Ethan was a player haha. But that's a tiny mistake.
And yup, I know that feeling when you have subscribers but nobody comments :/
I READ IT.
GEEZUS.