Layout: It was hard to read...I almost converted it to the basic layout. The picture went with the story though.
Content: I liked how well she planned her death. How she would kill herself, the suicide notes, and talking to her mom. A lot of people do plan, but then again a lot of others don't. I wasn't sure if she was actually going to go through with it, and when she did it was surprising and sad. You are a very good writer.
Layout: It was hard to read...I almost converted it to the basic layout. The picture went with the story though.
Content: I liked how well she planned her death. How she would kill herself, the suicide notes, and talking to her mom. A lot of people do plan, but then again a lot of others don't. I wasn't sure if she was actually going to go through with it, and when she did it was surprising and sad. You are a very good writer.
Overall: Great job. (: