AMAZING:) I love this story so much<3 I think that Draco is sooo hot!!! It's really interesting and well written...it flows so its easy to understand<3 There is nothing worse than a good plot but badly written, however this story has a fantastic plot and is brilliantly written:) Keep it up!! Please update soon:) I'm addicted<3 x
This is really awesome. It's weird for me to read something with these characters without it being for the original book but you've pulled it off for me. I enjoyed reading it :3 Your writing style makes it easy for me to read and get into it. The relationships in the story are well thought out and complex. Keep updating. It can only get better and better.
This is really awesome. It's weird for me to read something with these characters without it being for the original book but you've pulled it off for me. I enjoyed reading it :3
This is really awesome. It's weird for me to read something with these characters without it being for the original book but you've pulled it off for me. I enjoyed reading it :3
I really like how you've shown Draco without breaking from what I've gathered he's like in the books (I haven't read many). He's friendly to Addie but not in the over-the-top friendly way that would destroy his character. I like the personalities of the characters that shine through your writing, something that I think you've done well. Also your way of writing compliments and fits with the characters and plot. Not something that I'm into, though, but that's probably because I'm not up-to-date with the Harry Potter World.
I think this is really great! You have a weird and wonderful mix of characters in this and your writing is so great! It's a great achievement when all of your characters' personalities mesh well with each other and it just shows off your talent as a writer. I have grown to ole Addie and Draco's relationship; I think it's adorable! Xx
I just re read it and wanted to say again how much I love it Your writing is incredible and you have captured the characters amazingly Keep up the good work.
So glad everyones finals are over! It means we can ALL go back to writing and that also means I'm going to be less bored after school. Anyways I enjoying this very much and I LOVE this chapter and how it's all working out. I especially love the part where Fiona gets her lights punched out :p -LTW
Throughout your writing I can see how Harry and Addie might like each other and as much as I want it I think, for this story, it would be best to go with George. Although I do like the suggestion made by I_like_to_write which was to have Harry pine after her for a few chapters. It would make things interesting!
George: seems like a great idea. Harry: not so much. You don't want to ruin their friendship when they both need eachother. This story is very interesting. Update soon?
George....seems like a fun route Harry....would piss off draco/ break his heart :) / :( I like them both but George is just so, so very FUN! So I'm voting George but having Harry pine after her for a few chapters before noticing Ginny again would be interesting :p Love the story as always can't wait to read more! And of course I'm going to read more, though I do love a bit of fluff and cutsey stuff before we start ripping out people intestines and such :) (I'm assuming this is what happens when Lucius forgets he left a cruxios curse on for to long)