One Last Breath - Comments

Love this. Beyond love it really. Wish you hadn't lost your chapters like you had, as I would have loved to see how you ended this, but the end of what is there is still almost enough closure to keep me from agitation, haha. It's a beautiful story with beautiful characters and the raw emotion was splendid. <3

Love this. Beyond love it really. Wish you hadn't lost your chapters like you had, as I would have loved to see how you ended this, but the end of what is there is still almost enough closure to keep me from agitation, haha. It's a beautiful story with beautiful characters and the raw emotion was splendid. <3

i think im going to choke on sobs when she dies... and im not going to be attractive about it.

Oh my goodness. I just spent the past 2 hours reading all of that.
It's so sad!!! D: I love this story though.<3

Aweee nooo! This is breaking my heart! :( ♥

will there be a sequel or at least an epilogue where noah has a happy ending?

AWESOME!!!!!!

I really do adore your writings.
Whoring this out on my profile. ^^

O_o Well i'm extremely ecstatic that it isn't affecting her arms as badly as her legs, but now i'm slightly worried about her lungs and her heart! Bless Skylar for asking about the plastic tube to help her keep breathing when they start to pack up. I really hope she goes through a dry spell, i really do. She's got too muc to live for, and now she has Noah! :') Please update again soon! ♥♥

Oh fuck. Sobbing.

This had me in tears from the minute I started to read it. It's an extremely beautiful story in more ways than one. When she lost Jul and Lucas, that must have been the most terrible feeling in the world, but they had gone in a beautiful and perfect way. They weren't alone. But now, even with her eagerness to survive this, now the realisation that she probably won't hits everyone the morning she wakes with little feeling in her legs, you cannot stop the feeling of your heart dropping. You can only feel sympathy for her, Noah and her family. It must be really tough on Noah, he's in the love with her and she's in love with him; but knowing that they haven't got much time together also pulls your heart strings, you can't stop yourself from hoping that this is the worst of it, that she will get better; but you know deep down that miracles don't happen as often as you would like them too. As her doctor, he wants to do anything in his will to help her; but it's happening all so fast. The end of chapte twenty was beautiful in my opinion, and i really cannot wait to see what is in stall for the next. The way you have written this story is remarkable; you have enabled the reader to feel all emotion. Please update again soon, i have never read a story like this before. I'm eager. Sorry for all that, i just started writing and it wouldn't stop. :D ♥♥

I cried. Legit I cried. I love skylar so much, she's so great. And I always knew she was gonna for but it's so hard tradi g it happen do slowly :( this was beautifully written though, and I'm glad you're back to finish it :)

always gonna make me sob :(
update soon!

such a great update! i'm getting sadder the more this goes on :(

This makes me so sad, but I still love it.
Please update soon. :)

Love this story =)

this makes me so sad :(
but great update, nonetheless!

Just read all of the chapters so far, and I love it. You are a really talented witer. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

I can really tell you researched this, and I love that. Everything's so realistic here, from the characters to the actual diseases. :)
I hope Skylar can hold on for just a little while longer, since she and Noah are absolutely adorable. I love the chemistry between them.
Julia and Lucas's deaths were sad and it's even sadder that she was feuding with Skylar, but it makes the story even more realistic than it already is.
That last chapter made me tear up, too. I hope she can make up with Anthony before things get any worse for her. :,( I'm subscribing, totally.

I love this story :-)
It's so well written and such a good plot!
I can't wait until you update again!