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  • coco.

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    I miss this story, hope you're all right! :) <3

    xo
    June 23rd, 2012 at 07:15am
  • TheBall00ns

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    Interesting.
    December 22nd, 2011 at 04:53pm
  • she'sthesmoke

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    I kindof fucking love this ;D pleeeeeaseeee write more lol
    December 19th, 2011 at 03:04am
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    Your plot is so interesting! And your writing is very good! Although, and don't take offense to this, but it could use a little spell-check and grammar clarification, but who's couldn't? :)

    I think my favorite thing about this is that in the flashbacks, you can tell that Frank was different back then then he is now just by your writing. I don't know if you do that purposely or not, but it's awesome. Keep it up!
    July 27th, 2011 at 07:57am
  • Dumb_dumb

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    I am getting more, and more curious about what Frankie has contracted. He seems to be very ill, I wonder not only what he has, but how he got it.
    This might be random, but I would not be surprised if Gerard branded Frank. After what I have read I would not be surprised about a lot of things.
    I have a weird feeling about Frankie sleeping in Gerard's room, just the way that he is smirking about it makes me a little suspicious about what will happen either later that night or in the morning, and I am not reffering to the morning ritual blowjob. Ouch. That would hurt though, for Frankie. Considering their relationship though it seems like he would do anything to make Gerard give a halfhearted smile, or to slightly warm his heart. I like that, I also like that he gets that fuzzy feeling inside of him (Frank) when he gets to sleep on the cot in Gerard's room. I like that he can get a giddy, good feeling inside if he is allowed to be close to Gerard.
    The scene in the mall made me smirk. I thought that was amazing that Gerard is fearless and will show his dominance anywhere. I love that there are no boundries, yet he still has not done anything that could be catagorized as "bad", such as beating Frank in public or something. I wonder what Gerard would say if he did that, because surly people would freak out. I could imagine him taking a few seconds to turn around, flash a smirk and saying he is teaching Frank a lesson because of their situation, then dismissing all of the screams and continuing. I also like that Frank does not immidently say "Master" to Gerard, because I do not think that he would get used to calling him by that name within a few seconds. I love that Gerard seems to have no shame, and has complete authority over Frankie. As cruel as it sounds I love the second to the last sentence. ""Now, tell me what my name is." I felt hin shift his weight, making it impossible to get comfortable." For an odd reason I like that he was making it so that Frank was not comfortable, I suppose it is a punishment. =]
    Thank you for such a quick update, waking up and reading this is truly amazing. Do not stress out too much with another update, we have waited before, and I know I am willing to wait again. And to answer you author's note no I did not like it, I love it! =P Thank you again!!
    July 19th, 2011 at 07:54pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Oh my god, that was so.....he used him as a seat in the middle of a shopping centre!
    That's sheer genius. xD
    But then, Frank did first of all question Gerard and then called him Gerard instead of Master.
    Seriously, I love this.
    July 19th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    You're back! :D
    I really think it makes the whole thing better with the 'He' and 'Him' being capitalised. It just really emphasises that Gerard's above Frank in the means of him being Frank's Master and everything.
    I really love this, and seriously, take your time with the updates. :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 04:45pm
  • Dumb_dumb

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    *hold the power of answering it, or not.
    I love so many things from here, I do not know where to start... I guess I'll just dive in. I love how Frank calls Gerard "Master" and when referring to him you use capital letters instead of just blandly saying "him". I love that Gerard dictates Frank's life, and choses just about everything for him. I love that Gerard somewhat discreetly shows that he cares by having a safe word, but at the same time turns back to the stone Dom by saying that Frank needs to give him a reason for saying it. I love how Gerard knows how to take care of Frank when he needs it, rather than sending him into a dumpster polluted ally. I find it pretty cute that Frank likes to do chores, and that he has a chore list bi am very intrigued to find out what you have up your sleeve. Thank you so much for updating, I really appreciate the effort, and the time you spent on it, and I can only hope that we (the readers) make it all worth while for you! And yes, please do not stress out too much!
    July 19th, 2011 at 02:57am
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    Oh wow, you came back! =D Seeing that this updated made my day, so thank you! I hope that everything is okay though, especially taking into consideration the vacation you had from this, is everything alright? I know that is a pretty personal question, and I am sorry about that, and if course you h
    July 19th, 2011 at 02:48am
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    We the people of subscribia demand an update!
    February 27th, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • coco.

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    This.
    Oh my God, have I told you yet how much I love you?! :D
    I think Frank's placement is *cough* under Gerard *cough*.
    I'm just kidding.
    Okay, I'm not. :DDD

    I want more of this like, right now.
    Seriously, I'm starting ot love this fic. <333
    December 7th, 2010 at 03:32am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    That didn't seem unrealistic. Sure, I don't know much about the culture of BDSM, but from what I do know, it seems totally real, in the sense, ya know. xD
    And I reckon, I think, that the perfect placement would be with Gerard. Haha, it just does. xD
    I love this! I love the whole culture that it brings in. You don't see many stories with it in.
    December 6th, 2010 at 10:55pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    The idiot I am forgot to subscribe to this...wtf!
    The flashback...I agree with Devihla, Gerard sounds a bit sleezy in my head too.
    It's a kinda...vice from him and stuff.
    But this is amazing, still.
    December 3rd, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • Devihla

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    I don't know why, but in the flash-back, gerard sounds so sleezy in my head... Like he's talking slow... =S
    I need to go read it again. Heh.
    Still awesome writing!!
    December 3rd, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • coco.

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    This story...oh my god.
    I love these kinds of stries; the whole d/s type.
    Especaly when G is the Dom and lil' Frankie is the Sub <3333
    I know that's slightly perverted but, hey, I'm Coco.
    How does this story not have more comments?!
    Madness, I tell you.
    Madness.

    Please update soon.
    You've got a fan in your hands <3333
    December 3rd, 2010 at 05:35am
  • Devihla

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    Oh, this is brilliant! The way you write it is so perfect. Frank is obviously incredibly dominated, like a trained dog or something.
    It's incredible, doll! Your writing is so good, and all the puns and such had me laughing in the second chappy. I was curious, since the only sub I knew of was in sandwich form.. =D
    Also, your reasoning for how Matt knew Frank was into being dominated was really convincing. I didn't see it coming, but I totally agreed once I read it.
    This is incredible, doll! I'm subscribing right away! =D
    November 29th, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • MacabrePansy

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    Super excited for the next chapter! Generally speaking, I'm not too into S&M, but this seems... Way deeper than most. And it's very well written.
    November 29th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    The way these chapters were written makes me want more, right away. Which is impossible. xD
    But really, this is good. You're a good writer, honestly.
    I'm subscribing and can't wait for more!
    November 29th, 2010 at 09:51pm