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I haven't been on this website in a long time, so seeing this story updated has made my day
I loved it, fantastic work. Thank you for fufilling my Remus/Sirius feels!

I cannot even start to tell you both how superbly, stunningly written this is and how happy I am to find someone who, I assume, thinks the same things about Sirius and Remus. This story is just pure genius, truth, warmth and talent wrapped into one!
The updates are slow, yes, but so worth the wait.

(sorry, I hit the comment button by accident...more comments for you? Haha)

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..."tell me something I don't know." kind of thing, ya know?
I hate Peter, simply because I know what he does in the end.

Great story. Very cute.
Update soon!

I have always been in love with the idea of Remus and Sirius being together. The moment they were reunited in Azkaban, I honestly wanted them together.

Sirius is quite adorable in this - very caring and you can tell that he does, in fact, love Remus.
Speaking of which, I'm scared for Remus, especially after that last chapter. I hope he'll be all right.

I feel like James is oblivious, but only acting like it for his best friend's sake. Like, he wants to wait for them to come clean so that he can be like "[i

WHOO, HARRY POTTER FAN-FICTION :D

I like the layout, it's really pretty and the colours match perfectly with the Gryffindor house theme colours. This story is probably one of the few HP fan-fics I've seen that is quite well-written and you pull off present tense quite well, without it grating on the reader's nerves. You've managed to capture the true essence of the characters, like Lupin is still serious and Sirius is still rather cocky x] This is quite a cute slash, it isn't cringeworthy, like most slashes on here tend to be, it's cute and more focuses on emotions rather than doing the dirty. x]

Well done, great job!

I really love this story ha ha

This story was alright.... I read the first chapter and while you did a good job writing it I'm just not into slashes. I hope this doesn't offend you but I really won't be reading more of this. But you are a good writer and don't let this bum you out or keep you down. Best of luck and have a good day

Honestly, I've never read an HP fanfic that I actually liked, but this one definitely has to be the first! playthings took the words straight out of my mouth - you put the great J.K. Rowling to shame with this. I absolutely love the details that you have in this and the emotions and feelings of the characters are really there, if you catch my drift. I'd never would've expected Snape to be in Gryffindor, even in a fanfic. He's just too...emo, haha! Obviously Remus would be first to make friends with Snape. I sort of expected that; he seems to be one of those friendly sort of guys :3 Anyways, I like how you keep the Marauders' integrity true to the books. Alot of times, authors tend to put different spins on the Marauders and honestly, that just kills it, but like I said, I totally love how you keep the integrity here. I'm totally subbing to this; this is amazing and I can't wait to read more! <3

I literally just died <3 That was absolutely HILARIOUS. It's sweet, and it's not an in your face slash, which is refreshing. FANTASTIC work!!!

Nice layout though :o My shock at slash SIrius/Remus. I think it's interesting that you write in the present tense instead of past. That's something new, but you stayed consistant with it so it didn't bother me. You actually wrote very well, and the relationship between the two wasn't offensive it just was. I kind of like that actually. It seemed almost natural really.

haha of course Peter freaking has detention already
I love Sirius so much, him or Remus is probabaly my favorite character
They kissed, whoa, are thye like wait, gosh im confused with that part.
So Sirius and Remus like each other, that's what I'm getting from this.
Oh, James is mad as hell damn haha.
I like this, but I don't understnad why the chapters arent in order.

I also never subscribe to stories, but I subscribed(:

I`m not even a harry potter fan
but I like this a lot it`s amazing(:
they also have a cute relationship(:

You put J.K. Rowling to shame with this. You're an amazing writer, and the way you're so descriptive so easily is just perfect. Your words flow, and you can practically taste Remus's uncertainty about it all and Sirius's complete and utter loathing for having been placed in Gryffindor. I'm actually seriously considering subscribing, and I don't subscribe to any stories. Well done.

I like this layout, it's pretty.

Oh, this is gonna be good! This is obviously a harry potter fan ficion, but I like how its with Sirius and Remus and such, that's a really good idea! I lke how you are focusing on Remus, it'd be cool if each chapter you focused on a new character maybe? That would be cool. Ugh Peter, if only the knew now what he does in the future. Okay, I might be wrong, but didn't Sirius run away from his parents, therefore, he shouldnt be worrying. Or s that later he runs away? Oh gosh they're all going to the tree oh jeez that should be interesting!

I like your writing a lot, and it's a really begining to I bet, an amazing story :). Wonderful job!

I like this layout, it's pretty.

Oh, this is gonna be good! This is obviously a harry potter fan ficion, but I like how its with Sirius and Remus and such, that's a really good idea! I lke how you are focusing on Remus, it'd be cool if each chapter you focused on a new character maybe? That would be cool. Ugh Peter, if only the knew now what he does in the future. Okay, I might be wrong, but didn't Sirius run away from his parents, therefore, he shouldnt be worrying. Or s that later he runs away? Oh gosh they're all going to the tree oh jeez that should be interesting!

I like your writing a lot, and it's a really begining to I bet, an amazing story :). Wonderful job!