June 14th, 2013 at 09:37pm
gawddddd these two chapters were just...so much. guhhh i'm still processing everything because geez do those two have a tangled web of problems that they're both still scared to every want to talk about. geez, seriously...just...so...much...
Lovely updates, to both of you. I'm sorry I feel behind, once again so I read both in one sitting and that was such a great decision because shit's crazy and the therapist conversation (really hunter?) and conversation with john (finally!!!!!--kinda). AND PROM. and shit, I'm still processing obviously but just so much.
I still love the flipping povs and present/past and how effortlessly it reads. I usually don't like that sort of thing but it's so smoothly written and there's still a consistent voice but still has a difference, especially in present/past aspect. That probably doesn't make much sense -shoulder shrugs-.
One of my favorite stories on mibba, even though I fall behind on updates. But hey, I'm still reading and still know what's happening and still want to know what will happen, so that's good, right? I have so much respect for this story and both of the authors, it's obvious how much effort and time were involved in figuring it out and dammit, that's something that's missing on mibba. that's something that's missing in a lot of books being published today. -insert rant about bad stories and bad plots and bad characters and how writers don't take pride in the art anymore here- CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
this is a sucky comment, my apologies. I'm at work and just finished reading so I'm just everywhere.
haha thank you so much for the kind words, as always. We're trying to make sure the past/present thing isn't cheesy as fuck so I'm glad you're liking it. We actually do spend mass amount of times working on this and discussing it so it's baffling that anyone even recognizes that. lol. Don't worry you didn't fall too far behind, we took forever to update anyway haha. Mibba, and authors in general, need to realize it's less about the quickness and more about the content sometimes. So thank you for always commenting and being so kind. We really appreciate it. Also, you need to update ASAP!