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  • liar's lane.

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    @ becauseiamfree
    thank you so much for the comment!
    June 7th, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • State Of Grace

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    My heart breaks every time she gets like the way she got at the end of the chapter. She's so vulnerable and broken it's heart breaking. I'm really glad though that John grabbed her and took her home before she could go into whatever happened in the attic. Glad you got an update out, can't wait for the next one! Loved it!
    June 7th, 2013 at 06:10am
  • kaitlynncsws

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    VVV what she said it's so heartbreaking but at the same time i can't wait for it all to get better for both John and Hunter because they need eachother
    May 18th, 2013 at 03:53am
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    This is so heartbreaking and lovely. I like the shift in John's attitude and I hope it lasts! (:
    April 8th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • State Of Grace

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    Oh my lord that father scene made me cry that was so heartbreakingly perfect. It was just ugh. I really loved how John has finally decided to go out and fix things and people. I alps really loved how he finally confessed what happened with hom and hunter to his father. Loved, loved, loved it. Can't wait for the next update!
    April 7th, 2013 at 06:38am
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    i have been so busy i haven't been able to catch up on this. but i just did and oh my gods it is SO. FREAKING. GOOD. you guys are really talented. i love that you guys have long chapters and characters with such deepness. i can't wait for what's next. and to see if John is able to fix himself and Hunter.
    April 6th, 2013 at 07:20pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    these long chapters are amazing! thank you! and wow i love the whole progress that went on in a single chapter :D hope it gets better for them both...
    April 5th, 2013 at 11:55pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    @ patheticmind
    Thanks, as always, I appreciate it. I'm just having one of those months were nothing can make me happy lol. I don't love most of the shit I write, or even act proud of it, but I was, oddly, proud of this chapter. We're trying to make it all come together, but every time we do, we find ourselves adding like ten more things in that we didn't think of before. It's like a whole new dynamic of each character I never actually thought about. I tried to explain the story line to my other friend, some one who I work with, and she was just like..well, there's a lot going on in that, huh? And when she said it, I didn't think of it like that, but then I reread this chapter when I got home and I was like - fuck, she's right. I'm just glad it's not TOOOOO much and that it still makes sense.
    I get that people suck at commenting, but like, bitches, don't subscribe if you're gonna just sit there and give two shits about it. lol. Like five words is better than nothing.
    Also, I'm sure you could have come up with this story line. And truthfully, we started writing this like legit two years ago, and never did anything for it or never moved forward until one day - we just revamped all of it and said, "now, it's time." Real biblical and shit lol. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the comment! I'm excited for your John story to keep going. That baby momma is a bitch.
    April 5th, 2013 at 09:25pm
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    Well thank you! That is so nice of you to say! Ketely and I are trying really hard. Even when we're not writing, we're texting each other about it and trying to figure it all out. I swear, it's kind of all we think about. So I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm not very proud of most of the stuff I do, but this chapter, I have to admit, I enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to comment - I really do appreciate it!!!
    April 5th, 2013 at 09:20pm
  • patheticmind

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    dude, don't I know it about the commenters these days. they are really sucking. I dunno what's going on with mibba readers these days. Like, back when I was updating Exhale I would get a dozen comments a chapter and now I'm lucky if I get two. I seriously do not get it. The writing's better, the story is wayyyyy better, characters are more interesting... it baffles me how little the "new" generations of mibba readers don't care about the craftmanship in writing or a great plot line, they just want the next chapter.
    BUT SHIT GURL THAT CHAPTER. Seriously, just all the feels in the world right now for John and Hunter. I also really love John and his mom, and how they just get each other... it's perfect.
    Ugh, this is one of those stories I wish I would have thought of, I love the storyline so much. I love the history between John and Chase and Hunter and I think you both do a beautiful job at writing them. There's so much complexity there, with their emotions around the death of Chase and the love they share. I just really love it and it's so beautifully executed! There's still so much mystery too, it's like as the past is unraveling, now I'm bracing myself for the future and what's in store. I'm so in love with it, seriously. And trust me, it takes a lot for me to like stories on mibba anymore (that's a conversation for another time though).
    Don't be discouraged!! Seriously, you are so damn talented at writing and you do it so fluidly and with such a great voice. And you think about the character, how they act and feeling, the complexities and challenges in their life. There's more to a person than who they're dating or who they're pursuing. You have no idea how nice it is to read a story where the author(s) both think about creating dynamic characters. But I'm sure you know all this, I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate it!
    Lovely chapter. Fantastic writing.
    April 5th, 2013 at 05:04pm
  • Hanzukel8123

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    OH. MY. GOSH. I can't even formulate words right now...I'm seriously so in love with this story...y'alls hard work has definitely shone through and has made this by far, one of the best stories I've ever read...on Mibba, in books, ANYWHERE. I can't describe in words how much I love this story. It's so well written, and I'm loving how y'all balance the past with the future and just...yeah...it's seriously so good. I get so excited to see updates from this story, so I'm anxiously awaiting your next update already :) I keep reading and re-reading this story because I love it THAT much. so yeah. :) Keep it up, it's great :)
    April 5th, 2013 at 04:10pm
  • IndigoGirl8123

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    Wow, that was intense. It feels good to finally understand what happened and who Chase was exactly. So many emotions in the flashbacks though! xx
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:27pm
  • IndigoGirl8123

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    Wow, that was intense. It feels good to finally understand what happened and who Chase was exactly. So many emotions in the flashbacks though! xx
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:27pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    thank you so much for these really long chapters they are amazing
    cant wait for more <3
    March 22nd, 2013 at 12:05am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    glad you're still enjoying it. I think we kind of figured using only one POV would make it repetitive, but less repetitive at the same time. Which makes no sense, but somehow works. Hopefully, I can force myself to write something soon. BTW, loving the new John story you've got!
    March 21st, 2013 at 02:53am
  • patheticmind

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    you guys do the whole past/present thing so flawlessly. Usually I'm kinda iffy about it but you two make it work so well. Also, I just realized that both of you are only writing one pov and it's just brilliant so I might steal that from you for my next cowrite just so you know.
    great update. great story. great writing. quality mibba content (one of the few, amiright?). can't wait for more.
    March 20th, 2013 at 04:10pm
  • State Of Grace

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    Oh my gosh I think this is by far the beat chapter yet. I absolutely loved the flashback on the past and how hunter was this girl who was trying to be as perfect as she could be. Honestly, I'm not sure really how I feel about chase just yet. I feel like they both cared about each other but I also feel like maybe hunter only really was with him because she wanted a perfect life with a perfect boyfriend and with chase people would think that. I don't know, but I love this so much
    Update soon!
    March 19th, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • Hanzukel8123

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    woah!!! that chapter was SUPER intense!!! ok, the story is making MUCH more sense now...wow...your writing is just...wow. amazing. i am absolutely in love with this!!! ahhh!!! i'm loving the deepness and intensity of this story and can't wait to see how y'all plan on fleshing this story out! can't wait for the next update!!! :D
    March 19th, 2013 at 12:07am
  • liar's lane.

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    @ Cristhi thank you! things will start being cleared up more next chapter (which I'm finishing up right now!)
    March 12th, 2013 at 01:36am
  • MercuryFreddies

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    This story is just... wow, I'm intrigued about everything, the whole thing is quite deep, I seriously want to keep reading.
    (Ps: the ones writing the story have really great skills)
    March 10th, 2013 at 09:11am