The Story Left Untold. - Comments

  • The Color Abi

    The Color Abi (300)

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    Sav, this is so beautifully written and so upsetting!

    The way Jack’s thinking and how it’s described with Zack leaving brings tears to my eyes, it really does. I love how in his mind, Jack should really speak up and stop Zack from leaving; the way he goes through a list of some of the things they’ve been through together makes me smile because we know they love each other, they really do.

    I love how they convince each other to stay together and not take a small break – it makes my heart beat with joy and a grin break out onto my lips. The ending is perfect and just so heart warming because you just know they’re going to be together forever now.
    December 7th, 2010 at 09:00pm