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  • cookiemonster2395

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    I really fucking love this, I love the way u write it! It reminds me of one of my favorite authors straight up, I even used my favorite word!(fuck) seriously a fabulous story <<<< ( there the other fav word) please update I love it so much!!!!
    October 27th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • Brielle;

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    @ Robin 'The Sidekick'
    Thank you so much <3
    January 17th, 2013 at 06:43am
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    Wow, such a beautiful layout. I read the super short first chapter. I love how the picture goes with the story. “Oddly colored red hair.” I’ve never read a story written like that. You draw the reader in, just with the first chapter. It’s so interesting and lovely. I love it! And the fact that he has no idea what he’s doing either is cute. Chapter two was even shorter. I actually like this. You do a great job bringing the characters to life when it comes to description. I like that. You again drew the reader in and you make me want to know what else is going to happen or what’s happening. He sounds totally hot too. Chapter three makes me want a full chapter though. Because no I’m way too drawn in and I want to know what the heck is going on. I love how they first met. A longboard flying in her direction, epic. Chapter four is really good. You have so much detail in such a short chapter, it’s insane. I love the fact that she wanted to stay away from him but she couldn’t. he looked like a heartbreaker but he was like a drug, and just with the first look. Chapter 5 was a bit longer but I really like this. It’s addicting. I’m gonna subscribe and recommend. Keep it up!
    January 17th, 2013 at 06:37am
  • blonde.

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    you would stop there. haha
    update soon:)
    cant wait for more!
    December 29th, 2011 at 08:45am
  • tanyavsqz

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    Still waiting.....
    September 5th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • rainy_day_girl

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    I just found this story, I love it!! :D
    August 16th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • blonde.

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    Still waiting!
    June 3rd, 2011 at 07:33am
  • blonde.

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    Waiting for more! :)
    May 7th, 2011 at 08:01am
  • blonde.

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    I love it.
    Amazing, amazing, amazing.
    Update soon.
    Sorry I havn't been around, really busy. :)
    Love you.
    April 9th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • touma-senpai

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    oh my tasty burritos,
    i'minlovewithyourstorynow<3
    btw i think i should kill john >:D
    li'l man-ho ;D
    February 24th, 2011 at 03:25am
  • DesiraeBenn

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    hahaha love it..update soon plz
    January 22nd, 2011 at 01:00am
  • Brielle;

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    Thanks! :D
    January 19th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • BBluv4

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    I like this <3 I'm going to subscribe.
    January 19th, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • Brielle;

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    Thank you guys for the support! It's really what's moving this story along! THANKYOU!

    @NB; thanks, I make them myself cause I don't like the options they give me for layouts. :P
    January 9th, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • DesiraeBenn

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    loving the layout,very fresh!XD
    January 9th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • Kodiizee

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    This is going good :P lol
    Awww dont delete!!
    January 8th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • TaylorIsHere

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    Why would you delete?
    I love this - it reminds me of Elen Hopkins' books. I love the way you write and it's amazingly interesting to read.
    January 7th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • lakeside

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    its really cool how you tell the story :-) its one of the best on here
    January 7th, 2011 at 05:50pm
  • DesiraeBenn

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    i like yerr story and how yerr chapters are masde
    the topic of yerr story is amazing
    i'll keep reading as long as you keep writing =)
    December 28th, 2010 at 10:11pm
  • blonde.

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    I don't like Chase at all. He is a nasty guy. :) lol
    I love the new layout! Its very "hipster". lawl. ;)

    Update soon and quick. :P
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:50am
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