When the Wicked Weep - Comments

Can I just say thar I absolutely love this story? It's remarkable and twisted and I adore it. I love all of the violence, humor, truth. All of it! Update soon, please, and make me extremely happy. XP

Alright, I have to say that I love the last four paragraphs, and I can't give you a favorite line because I enjoyed all of it. I mean, I believe I've told you this before. In your writing, you always state so many hard truths, and so many facts that some people don't accept. Example. People don't change, not that much anyway. I loved all the points you gave, about artists, musicians, mothers.... I enjoyed it, and I'm truly upset that I forgot to check on this earlier. I was craving to read some of this last night. :)

SO I know that I'm such a dick because I haven't commented in you know, ages, and I kind of lost track of your updates BUT with all of that being sad, I sat down, with popcorn and soda and my cigarettes and reread the entire thing because I couldn't remember which one I had read last, plus, I'll admit, I just wanted to reread it. lol. This is such a good story. I love it.

Honestly, there's so many hard truths in it, and you describe them, paint the picture, if you will, perfectly. Not to mention there's such depth to all of your characters. I'm going to wait paitently until you decide to kick Tank's, and more importantly, Chaos' asses, but honestly, I still like them. Well, I like Chaos. lol. The thing about it is it's hard to decide whether one character is bad or good which, I really like. Like I said, they are layered, and by no means simple.

I'm wondering how, and when, the other girls are going to get changed. Kind of wondering if it'll be like a mass change, or if they'll pick them off one at a time.

I'm also wondering if she'll like it better when they are involved. While I understand she probably doesn't want her friends to go through it, not to mention them to be put into danger, maybe she'll like that she doesn't have to hide it from them anymore. Nitro seems to not be getting it, though. She should have just burned him with her cigarette instead of giving it to him. But that might be because I just tend to want to harm, rather then help. Lol.

Anyway, enough with the rambling. lol. I really enjoyed all of it as a whole, and you should update soon just to make me happy. XP. Plus, I do have access to butter knives. Just saying. XP

Weeeelp, I'm an asshole for taking so long to comment on this and for that, I'm sorry. I haven't really been myself lately lol.

Despite the fact that I suck, I really loved all the updates I think I read from 10 to current XD. I'm interested in Chaos, especially with her first impressions of him. I'll definitely be making a better effort to actively keep up with this :)

This is, I must say, very intriguing. The characters already have me hooked. I love the way how they are so truthful about themselves. I get a very much "no shit" vibe from them which I admire, maybe on a bit of a lesser scale, though. But this being fiction, I enjoy the hard edge that gives them.

Your style of writing is also pleasing. It all flows, and yet, unlike some writers it seems to be in a kind of jaggy way that really suits the story line.

Your descriptions, however, out shine all of the above by a mile. I couldn't for the life of me help but get caught up in them. They are amazing! They convey so much about the characters as well.

Off to read more!

I'm not entirely sure what I think of her new team. I think I like Chaos but I'm not too keen on the others...
Interested to see what her first mission will be...
more soon?

Okay, just a wondering, and I may be completely off here, but could it have been Sam in that department store all those years ago?! I mean, you've mentioned that the Company had been keeping an eye on her, was it as far back as when she was a kid? I don't know, maybe I'm completely wrong, but I can't help but notice the similarities between the two men. As I said, I may be wrong and it could all be coincidental....
Guess I'll have to just wait and see...
More soon?

I like Sam. He seems trustworthy, unlike the others she has met to do with the Company.
It's going to be interesting to see how their relationship develops.

Oh and I am proud of you for updating with out me coming to nag you :)

I like Sam's character so far. He seems like a very down to earth guy.

I sense that she'll stumble across something corrupt within the system that she now works for, but maybe that's just my paranoid nature, always assuming something is corrupt. I've already got bad vibes from the people she now works for from the last chapter and from the little things Sam has said now. But maybe my instincts are off lol.

More soon :P

I look forward to this Sam character and how he gets along with her. I'm interested if she will decide to get the girls involved or not. I mean, we're all pretty nosy in our own right haha, and they're bound to notice that something's up, so I wonder how all that will go down.

Hooray for answers at last...well some anyway :) I'm looking forward to her meeting Sam and seeing how the two of them get on!

I understand how she is comforted by a familiar smell, I get that all the time. I hope she does get some answers in the next chapter because I need them too!

Punk Rock Tinkerbell?! Did you know I have that tattoo or was it a lucky guess? Lol. And if you do get distracted and forget to update I shall pop by again :)

Well, I don't care if you don't know where you're going with it, but I like where it's going haha. And you sort of nailed my sense of agitation lol, so I applaud you. I tend to get very snippy and even slightly caustic when I'm angry with a loved one, so yeah, I guess "congratulations on getting my personality right" lol.

I want to know what she is! Rawr.

I'm also very interested in how this will change her relationships with the girls. She obviously has a natural temper, so I can see that causing issues with her new condition.

I really love this so far Sev :)

Okay, so that gave me some answers, but there are still a lot of questions floating around. I still want to know what exactly she is expected to do with these new powers and what will happen when she goes back to the girls. Will she explain everything? I mean Scratch already knows that there's something up, and they've surely realised that she disappeared from the club!

If you haven't updated in about a week I shall be back to remind you :)

What did she take? What has it done to her? What is she expected to do now?
I NEED answers!

Oh and like Hell, my favourite line was A needle to numb the pain, a pill to do the same, a line to keep you sane and a beer for all your shame

More soon please? :)

God. The updates were amazing. Honestly. My favorite lines were A needle to numb the pain, a pill to do the same, a line to keep you sane and a beer for all your shame. I may consider getting that tattooed on me some where. XP

What the fuck did she take?! I want to know. I'm betting that he lied to her. It is unicorn blood, isn't it?! Hahaa. Sorry, had to. XP.

You should update.... Like now. Just sayingggggg. :)

Damn, I wonder what the fuck that drug did to her. It seems like it's turned her into some sort of shapeshifter or something, but I'm not sure XD.

But yes, like she said "Man is fallible".

More soon?

Like Scratch, I don't really trust this guy, but I can understand why she is willing to take a risk. Being faced with cancer and death, I think I would be willing to try anything to avoid them.

More soon?

I'm not sure if I trust this guy. Maybe it's just in my nature to shy away from strangers, but the use of description, and the word "devil" in a paragraph describing him makes me think he's no good. Plus, attractive men tend to bring trouble so yeah: verdict = I distrust him lol.

More as soon as you can, I really do love this story.