My Little Princess - Comments

hahah, thanks! I wasn't sure how to finish it SOOO... hahah :)

Great story... but WHA!?! Necrophilia much!? XD

Comment swap here. I enjoy the intro, how the character is explaining how her mother disapproves of her because she isn't what the mother wanted, however, there are multiple grammatical mistakes that are hard to overlook and I felt it took away from the story. I would just go through and edit, but other than that, I think you have a very special piece.

thank you (:

AMAZING!!!!

I'll update sometime today it takes me a week or so to write a chapter for this story because I have to reread everything to get into it.

Of course I'll check out your story :)
I know how hard it is to get feedback, and I'll help out in any way possible.

I think that this story is really good and unique. I love the background a lot. I hope that you update very soon. I am definatly updating and subscribing to this story.
Also, I never really came across a story like this before. Can you check out my story, Slipping Away? It would mean a lot. I need feed back on it.

I actually enjoyed the story even though it is not what I normally read. The characters are enjoyable and plot has potential. Your word choice can be improved and there are 5 or 6 grammar errors that are a bit hard to ignore. It was an okay read but not my type of story that I would read.

Thank you SO much. Most of my stories are undiscovered, haha :) but thanks alot :)

time you can tell that she's a princess. Great job. Subbing and reccomending. If it wasn't for the comment swap feature, I never would've found this. I love this :D.

Well thanks(:

this is really cool

Haha. It takes me a little bit right now cause all my graduation stuff is coming up. I graduate Wednesday and then I promise I will update more often (:

There needs to be more D: I love it xD its so amazing and cute and stuff d: you know what i mean >.< i just can't explain it, I love the way you write(: I hope you get to adding more to this(:

Thank you (: I'm finally getting started on it again . Hehe.

Awwweee!!!

I love it love it love it love it :] I can't wait for you to post more!
Haha, and I loved that shout out at the end of Chapter 2 ;D

It seems so cute! I love fairytales. :)

This is RAD!

very nice kady. XD.
i hope my stories will come to be as good as yours.
love ya sis <3