It's Just Me. - Comments

So I have a few complaints, but not many. There is way too much going on in the layout. too many colors and designs. It's distracting. And when he vanishes, it's incredibly abrupt, which is good but the fact that she doesn't even seem to feel confused for more than a moment kind of misleads the entire feel of the story. But I do very much enjoy this. I love that she's like most girls in teh fact that she's afraid of a relationship and she does daydream and picture little scenarios in her head that will never happen. I can relate to her a lot in that effect. Everything was very sweetly described, and aside from my few comments it was very well done.

I am judging for the contest :D Wow...that is amazing! You describe everything perfectly, and it was so sad at the end. I could picture everything that happened in this, and everything flows really well. To be honest, I can't really find anything that needs to be made better. Just wow! :)

I really hope you win the contest - you deserve it! This is just lovely...the writing style, concept, your effortless dialogue and descriptions that come across to the reader so well...everything! Well done, dear :)

I enjoyed this. Personally I think it's perfect for that contest that we both entered. I love it.

That was really lovely, even the sad concept of it. I really enjoyed it.