December 9th, 2010 at 04:00am
I really cannot find the words.Tree branches are bare and snow lay like a cold blanket on the ground around them, but the warmth of the girl in his arms is enough for him. It’s all he’ll ever need.
That line was so effective and lovely. It was probably my favorite.
The imagery you used was magnificent. I don't know how you're able to tell such an amazing story in the amount of words you do. It's gorgeous and heart-warming, and it fills you with the love these people feel for each other when you're reading it. Like it's you that's there on the hood of the car, in the middle of winter, getting proposed to by the guy that you love.
It's just amazing, the light-heartedness of the ending. I love how she jumps in his arms, and she just cries into his shirt. I'm running out of words, but it seems you never do.
This was just...wow, Jamie. Thank you for this. <3
Loving the beginning's descritption of a situation so perfect and the epitome of what every teenager wants. I love that he's really in love with her, seeming to give off that he wants to keep her close forever (
The innocence that this female gives off is something relatable, I guess. Beliveable, even; she seems to brilliantly surprised when he proposes though I think it's certainly sure that they've been together. The act of the proposal itself it great; I love the description of his red, numb hand and the blue, blue eyes. That's just absolutely great.
His nerves shining through shows that not every man is a strong person at all times, though I assume that he might just be a bit cold as well.
Overall, just adorable, missy. Now, pardon me while I go write for what I was supposed to XD