Piercing - Comments

I liked this one, again it's moving.

I've done this.
Twice. Just to stop myself from cutting. I'm not sure if this is fiction or not but I know exactly how the main character feels.
I love how this is a whole series. I read the cutting one and the drinking one. If there's mre. I'd love to read them.(:
You're a good writer.<33

I'm not sure how I feel about this. I like the message you're trying to portray, but something about the way it's written seems a little off. I would've like to see more emotion put in this--aside from a few spelling errors it's pretty good though. At first, I was just wondering how a piercing has anything to do with what was going on. I also feel like if she was doing it to herself then it would have more meaning, having a friend inflict the 'self-mutilation/self-harm' doesn't really make it self harm considering someone else is doing it. You know? Otherwise great job.