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  • murderscene

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    That was very good! Well written! Also, I saw this video online :D pretty hot
    April 30th, 2012 at 06:33am
  • PurpleLighter1

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    wow. the hottest i hav ever read ever! u r a very gud writer :) keep doing well like this :D
    December 15th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • murderdolls_queen

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    wow. Just....Wow.
    July 14th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • Sister Ginger

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    That picture was...jesus. Ferard shall live on forever because of things like this.

    I loved this by the way. GO GEE THE PAIN SLUT.
    June 10th, 2011 at 01:40am
  • Mike Donovan

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    OMGee that was amazing!!!!!!!
    April 4th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • wiggles the alpaca

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    where did you find that picture?!?!?!
    *faints from sexynesss*
    February 7th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • BehindTheScenes;

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    Holy fucking hot hell.
    This is the BEST one shot I've ever read.
    Frerard, hot sex, AND fluff on stage?!
    You made my day. And my friends.
    <3
    January 14th, 2011 at 11:37pm
  • likeitmatters

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    Really well written =)

    Sophisticated and broad use of language.

    I like how you made a theme with the concept of legs at the beginning of the story. If I had to offer any constructive critiscism, it would probably be to go with the theme throughout the story and make it a recurring image.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 01:44am
  • Frankie's Gee.

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    One word. Wow!!!!
    December 29th, 2010 at 05:23am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    -drools-
    December 28th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • poisongirl24

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    0_0 More please? lol
    Haha I'm going to their concert in May, and I hope something like that happens...On stage... Plug and everything. ;]
    December 28th, 2010 at 07:43pm
  • lame sauce

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    *face goes red*....

    THATWASEUPERHOTANDSEXYANDOHMYGOD!!!!!!!!
    December 28th, 2010 at 12:15pm
  • S.C.A.R.E.C.R.O.W

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    hollly shit. THis was SOOO Good. o.m.g
    December 28th, 2010 at 09:12am
  • K_Shadows

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    Oh my fucking damn!!!!! I love how real it is!!!
    December 28th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    First and foremost: WHERE DID THAT PICTURE COME FROM? Yes, capitals were necessary. That is gorgeous. Now that I'm done drooling, on to the story!

    I really like how you actually took the time to set the story up rather than just jumping straight into the sex. I also have a soft spot for well written tour stories and (especially since I saw MCR on their last tour on the 17th) it makes it that more... real, I suppose. And I like how you're concentrating on Gerard's legs as well; making them the main focus of the story makes it into more than just a sexfest, although those are always nice as well.

    I noticed a few spelling mistakes but they didn't really take away from the story. But I liked this. I liked the setup to it and I liked the rather filthy sex. I'm very glad you chose to enter it in my contest and good luck! :D
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:48pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Wow! I will have to say that that was a hot one-shot! That made my mouth water, lmfao!! It was amazing and you're a very good writer. My first piece I have read that you've written!! I loved Gerard begging for it!
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:15pm
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