I like how you portray Damon although some of the dialogue with him was just a bit iffy to me. Compared to the last thing I've read of yours this is really great--the only thing I didn't like was how you introduced us to Damon calling him the 'mysterious man' in the bad. I think it would've been more...convenient? if there was like just an open spot next to him that she decided to take or whatever. But I do like that this is set after she tells him she will always love Stefan and while he's all drunk and bitter he decides to leave the girl alive because he's still got that bit of heart left--unlike when he killed Jeremy. :) Lovely job bb.
January 28th, 2011 at 09:20pm