September 17th, 2008 at 04:28am
"Fall of the Unsinkable."
First of all I loved how you described everything. "the chorus of the damned." it was just beautiful and heart warming. While I was reading all I thought about was the movie and that's not a bad thing, and I believe it made the story more powerful.
I like how you didn't give the main character a name, like she was an unknown soul on the Titanic that night. "I watched in horror as human beings, mothers and fathers, old couples and children, all were forced into the water. Deck chairs and tables were sliding down; some desperately threw them overboard as floatation devices."
I felt the emotion and it was like I was there. I don't know much behind the real story, but I think you done a great job of putting yourself in someone's shoes and feeling what they did.
"The surface disappeared, all I could see was black, and all I could feel was the tightening in my chest as I made my way to my cold ocean grave… "
The ending was mind blowing and like I said before, the thought of not giving her a name was brilliant all she is now is just a memory.
omygawd. i don't think i could have ever lived the tragedy better than what you wrote here. good job. good job.